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My Angel (Free verse) by emilys369

My angel has came to me, right down from the sky. He gave me his wings, and taught me to fly. He came to me like, a breath of fresh air. To be without him a second, just wouldn't be fair. His hugs are so gentle, His kisses so sweet. He's done everything possible, to sweep me off my feet. He's never afraid, to say what comes from his heart. I knew I'd be with him, right from the start. He put the light in my life, and showed me to see. I wouldn't change a thing about him, he's perfect to me. I think of him always, twenty-four seven. I know he will always be, my angel from heaven.

iowajerms 27-Jul-02/4:28 PM
i really like this poem. and don't worry about what horus8 says. he told me that i should be skinned alive because i used the word angel. oh well. i give u a 10




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