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My Angel (Free verse) by emilys369

My angel has came to me, right down from the sky. He gave me his wings, and taught me to fly. He came to me like, a breath of fresh air. To be without him a second, just wouldn't be fair. His hugs are so gentle, His kisses so sweet. He's done everything possible, to sweep me off my feet. He's never afraid, to say what comes from his heart. I knew I'd be with him, right from the start. He put the light in my life, and showed me to see. I wouldn't change a thing about him, he's perfect to me. I think of him always, twenty-four seven. I know he will always be, my angel from heaven.

razorgrin 27-Jul-02/4:39 PM
Horus most certainly did not! I did! angels..why not succubi or goblins?of all the cheesy, hackneyed shite...angels.the next angel poem i see, i'm hunting down the author and eating their internal organs, raw and dripping out of thier body cavity.




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