Re: a comment on Equality by sarah	26-Apr-04/7:33 PM
eh - not bad for a first try.
Re: a comment on Equality by sarah	26-Apr-04/7:29 PM
accessing
Re: a comment on Equality by sarah	26-Apr-04/7:19 PM
SOMEDAY -=Dark Angel=- I will hit EVERY ONE of these points (plus a few of my own) ^-^ ahaahhhahahh [cough] ahahahhHAHHHAHH
Re: Bottom half of a phone by That One	26-Apr-04/7:14 PM
you are = you're
Re: death by xunitedx	26-Apr-04/7:12 PM
a lyric?
Re: a comment on Equality by sarah	26-Apr-04/2:08 PM
LoL - hysterically.
Re: a comment on The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Apr-04/1:00 PM
Tool rocks.
Re: The True Irony by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Apr-04/12:58 PM
I just couldn't get my arms around this one. Maybe some line breaks, maybe some compartmentalization - dunno.
Re: Now I'm with you by Roisin	26-Apr-04/12:53 PM
A nice sentiment, and perhaps strongly felt - but too easy.
Re: a comment on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco	25-Apr-04/1:29 PM
I was imitating Kirk. James Tiberius.
Re: a comment on Remembering Pretty Days by wilco	25-Apr-04/11:01 AM
Spock. Your eyes. Make me want. To kiss you.
Re: To Be Happy by embersandenvelopes	25-Apr-04/10:51 AM
I liked polar-fickle-phases, and liked trying to figure out what it means.
Re: Remembering Pretty Days by wilco	25-Apr-04/10:49 AM
- shouldn't - didn't (apostrophe generally goes with the missing letter) - nonetheless is usually one word. Well done, but I'd consider loosing that second stanza, or to at least get more out of it. Nine.
Re: Exclamatory Abuse by Blindpoetry	25-Apr-04/10:43 AM
unusual texture, conveys well.
Re: evolution 9 by wilco	25-Apr-04/10:32 AM
looky, its a arrowhead. What is this creature, and how did its description merit a ten from daveslady? Are you, by any chance, Dave? I can give it a nine I guess, cuz well if its good enough for her...
Re: a comment on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>	25-Apr-04/10:27 AM
Don't get me wrong, I think its perfectly fine to have a haiku with 8 or whatever syllable counts. Generally its a short/long/short kinda thing, and most folks bristle at anything other than 5 7 5, possibly accepting 3 5 3.
Re: Exclamatory Abuse by Blindpoetry	24-Apr-04/6:52 PM
"to[o] cold" quick - fix and repost.
Re: a comment on She Searches For Love by validus_vox	24-Apr-04/3:42 PM
Sure, give it a shot. (you don't have to count, but you get the idea) Make it so you have to pick and choose the "right" word, the most appropriate image. You should find yourself questioning yourself when you write down little words like a preposition, or an article.(btw, that was just an example - did I need the word "down"?)
Re: Merry-Go-Round by Miggy	24-Apr-04/3:33 PM
Right off I don't like "passes by" - is there some other way to let me know you like being around this person? Some way to express that frustration when they bail so I can feel it instead of acknowledging it? Maybe it being a lyric gets you off the hook from being poetic? I hope not.
Re: She Searches For Love by validus_vox	24-Apr-04/3:28 PM
Hey Mike - Give this a shot as a poem. I don't mean that in a sarcastic way. Allow yourself half the lines, and a third the words.