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death (Lyric) by xunitedx
as light disappears it comes slowly creeping hopefully it takes me while i am sleeping i don’t want to see it coming that way i won’t run before i wake the next morning it will be done

Up the ladder: My
Down the ladder: Key to my heart

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4406
Posted: April 25, 2004 9:40 PM PDT; Last modified: April 25, 2004 9:40 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 212.219.223.37 | 26-Apr-04/12:31 AM | Reply
But what happens after death? It's all a bit of a mystery, isn't it?
[n/a] xunitedx @ 4.239.177.220 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 26-Apr-04/7:55 AM | Reply
wow, you're not bashing my poem. i even made up a nasty limerick about you for the first time you did bash one of my poems :). not that i really care just cuz nobody else has done that, at least that i have seen.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239 > xunitedx | 27-Apr-04/1:27 PM | Reply
You're right, I am unaware of any offensive poemes written about -=Dark_Angel=-. In the hope of reading one, I shall say this:

Your poeme is very bad.
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.217.164 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 27-Apr-04/1:40 PM | Reply
DARK ANGEL IS A WHORE
so is his mother
I came back for more
From his mother

BRING IT ON DARK ANGEL

U.A Fanthorpe (under an assumed name).
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239 > richa | 27-Apr-04/3:34 PM | Reply
Excellent. But xunitedx promised me a proper limerick. If it were posted as a poeme that would be even better.
[n/a] xunitedx @ 4.239.177.207 > richa | 27-Apr-04/6:27 PM | Reply
that sucks - here is mine

dark angel once was the man
but he lingered to long in that van
he wallows in shit
and he can't take a hit
so hit him as hard as you can
[9] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 26-Apr-04/7:08 AM | Reply
Yes, you imply an afterlife. But it must be a good afterlife to show no worry about it going in.
[n/a] xunitedx @ 4.239.177.220 > deleted user | 26-Apr-04/8:00 AM | Reply
i didn't try to imply that. i guess it's just the way it came out. it's just that i don't worry about anything really.
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 26-Apr-04/7:12 PM | Reply
a lyric?
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