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death (Lyric) by xunitedx
as light disappears it comes slowly creeping
hopefully it takes me while i am sleeping
i donât want to see it coming
that way i wonât run
before i wake the next morning
it will be done
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Weighted score: 5.2145653
Overall Rank: 4412
Posted: April 25, 2004 9:40 PM PDT; Last modified: April 25, 2004 9:40 PM PDT
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Your poeme is very bad.
so is his mother
I came back for more
From his mother
BRING IT ON DARK ANGEL
U.A Fanthorpe (under an assumed name).
dark angel once was the man
but he lingered to long in that van
he wallows in shit
and he can't take a hit
so hit him as hard as you can