| Re: a comment on submission to decay by FreeFormFixation |
11-Nov-03/8:42 AM |
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but that's the thing... that's not what it's about completely. it is not our fault at all, there were flaws from the outset. i know this touches severely on deism, but the living universe also borders some other Worldviews i dont care to expound upon.
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| Re: Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus |
9-Oct-03/10:05 PM |
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HAHAHAHAHAHA, it's funny cuz it's true. woops.
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| Re: blue lilac and I (edit) by richa |
9-Oct-03/10:00 PM |
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i luh'dis shit! but not shit in a bad way, shit in a great way! like gold shit made from rubies too!
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| Re: The Last Battle by seebergerb |
9-Oct-03/9:52 PM |
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i love similes. this is a great story as well as a poem, and the loss conveyed within it is very moving.
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| Re: Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum by ruella |
9-Oct-03/9:50 PM |
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| Re: Luicidity by LucidRevelation |
9-Oct-03/9:49 PM |
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smoking is fun! but seriously, i enjoyed this. smoke is a wonderful device to describe fluidity and infiltration.
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| Re: The masquerade by vamos_tuzos |
9-Oct-03/9:48 PM |
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| Re: sewer rat by irishfolksuicide |
9-Oct-03/9:43 PM |
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modest rat? modest mouse? ehh? Ehh? (it's my favorite band). This makes me think of the sanitation worker strike in chicago (lots of rats).
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| Re: a comment on ocd by FreeFormFixation |
5-Oct-03/3:48 AM |
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hahaha, i see it now. funny but i guess the acne reference is pretty obvious, though not intentional. metaphors, medicalphors, my downfall.
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| Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL |
26-Sep-03/11:38 AM |
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i like this poem. it makes me feel so detached, as i'm sure you must have felt observing such a tragic event.
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| Re: Take My Hand by milkymilk |
26-Sep-03/11:31 AM |
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very pretty. i like the mollusk simile.
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| Re: vigilante park -- by Ross Robbins by achingwish |
26-Sep-03/11:28 AM |
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i give this extra points because it mentions smoking!
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| Re: Ode to the Renesis by INTRANSIT |
26-Sep-03/11:27 AM |
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| Re: consider the following by crwncka1 |
26-Sep-03/11:26 AM |
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i wont even begin an equal rights type of comment...
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| Re: Hope and Fear by debased |
26-Sep-03/11:25 AM |
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| Re: Ginger Prawns prior to Sea world with Jeremy Irons by Bachus |
26-Sep-03/11:23 AM |
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