Re: The War by Tarquin De La Bog |
19-Aug-02/7:39 PM |
you no it's not even fun anymore, cuz you're writing is not even rankable..so..i wont even go there..cuz there's no there to go to you.
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Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog |
19-Aug-02/7:31 PM |
heres an encore presentation you fucking toadie...
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Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog
Bachus
19-Aug-02, 07:30 PM
u know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of my
life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your fucking
chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in the
desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year old
with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no wonder
you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking
rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah
should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think
this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses
economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you
fucking two versed parrot...ha! ----/10 ,
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Re: Why Me? by Tarquin De La Bog |
19-Aug-02/7:30 PM |
u know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of
my life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your
fucking chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in
the desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year
old with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no
wonder you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking
rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah
should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think
this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses
economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you
fucking two versed parrot...ha! ----/10
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Re: the toxic noise by fleshpedler |
19-Aug-02/7:16 PM |
n. not a chance! i wouldn't even want it to be.
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Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit |
19-Aug-02/7:14 PM |
z..is right this is fucking way..way beyond any of your other stuff..congratulations sir..you now have my respect and ear..not that that fucking matters none..i'll drink to that, in fact at this point in time i'll drink to anything..if i was working at horus8 right now i'd give you one of my odd little awards, but somehow i feel this is above it and below it all.so fuck it..i no longer hate you, then again i might hate you more here's a 10 for your whore!k
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Re: Few Too Little by talking_goldfish |
19-Aug-02/6:55 PM |
you know the more of these shit poems this bog fellow praises the stronger and stronger i get...keep going you lover and praiser of weak scripture..i'm having the time of my life reading your constant one brain cell powered banter, are you a jewish cantor? were you in the car with princess di when they headlined the pillar? cuz wow your fucking chiding pursed english sensibility is right up the alley of a merchant ivory film...the english patient part deux...another tiresome three hours with a burn victim in the desert..is just what this site needed..not that your even from england..cuz i'd bet money you're just the semen soaked left hand of some midwestern poemranking ten year old with a knack for creating false identities, and if by chance you are from the land of drizzle...then..even better, cuz with you breathing and stinking up the place...no wonder you people always say "god save the queen" save her from having to listen, and or read any of your short, bland, see through, mind de-expanding rhetoric lacking rhetoric...ode to the sea blah blee ree tee blah blah i'm deep blah blah..i'm from england land of literary geniuses..blah..blah the sea blee vlee....you americans..blah blah should learn from me blah blah...we beat your pathetic asses then...stole your colony..and evolved at a hundred times the rate of your so called country(cuz i don't even think this clown is even english) has in 1500 years..do the math..we are two hundred some odd years old, and ye are over a thousand yet..we americans have saved your asses economicaly, militarily, and stylistically more times than i care to count...stay there.. enjoy your short termed reading materials..you deserve it..and your welfare too. you fucking two versed parrot...ha! 3/10
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Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus |
19-Aug-02/6:28 PM |
hi z..thanks..i think..nah i'm over it now..i just promised a dear friend of mine that i would retell it, by mixing it proper with a couple of other...memories..that...fit..well..together, sleep well together, find solace together...destroy those birds that flock together, as a cat pulling feathers to leave front door matted suprises for you to step on, prior to grabbing the morning paper. (it probably would sound better orated in a pub throughing darts for thick mead.t
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Re: the toxic noise by fleshpedler |
19-Aug-02/6:15 PM |
To do what? ah free...to see?
To see..what?
oh...how sinple it really should be..
this poem fails to comfort me...but i love your name!
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Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus |
19-Aug-02/5:38 PM |
exciting..stupendous..now i know that i've struck a cord...fact is friend it's a true story and sometimes we don't write to impress or make the 'a' list, i'm very pleased that you dissaprove, cuz i personally feel everything you write, like, and say was precisely the biggest factor behind why i posted it to begin with..i hope you forget it as quickly as it forgot you /p.s to long? what? do you read fortune cookie novels and call yoursef a valid critic...here's a recommendation..."running with scissors" by Augusten Burroghs...oh, wait.. that would be way, way to long..you're right stick to the comments..we wouldn't want you getting any brighter...may you find yourself in quick sand one day screaming your user name over and over again...my friend yes, tell the queen hi said hullo. tea time. ta ta
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Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog |
19-Aug-02/5:16 PM |
five years old dad standing underweared in front of you, with a piss drop soaking through. breakfast anyone?
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Re: Why I want to kill Opie by Bachus |
19-Aug-02/3:18 PM |
oh and peta, kittens, wolfs, and daft little pussy petters who still don't appreciate the value of editing are next...so..prepare..silver, black crack smack your poodle with mothers velveta cheese stroodle..prepare!e
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Re: Why I want to kill Opie by Bachus |
19-Aug-02/3:12 PM |
I shall and will doug, have a splendid day, and i'm ,lol! with you...but i don't think goerge jr. really ever had a brain or a thought of his own...research shows that the presidency is just a front in this country...in actuallity we are controlled as a people by a mixture of four people, barry diller, david geffin, some mysterious drug laundering king pin(who lunches with clinton and tyson chickens don tyson, and the great great great grandson of the schmuck on the quaker oats box! pilgrims revolt and tan your white is right souls to a deep reddish brown...the indians were right, to dip the whites in honey and bury them up to their necks in fire ants! CHANT! CHANT! what was i saying...ah yes....the muslims are next on my list the submission is almost ready, so be steady.yes and prepare to really fucking hate me cuz i'm about ready to shit pure brown fire hose madness all over this patheous to optimism...
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Re: Black Buns by Bachus |
19-Aug-02/1:17 PM |
perhaps from a pre leaving kansas meditation? i love when mr. rivers starts going off about his mother in law in that biography, and also how it was unauthorized yet he co-wrote it...hilarious...have you watched little nicky lately, cuz that could have left some pitchy residue..'dead city radio' on cd, by burroughs is a fucking epic(check it out) it's slammerific, and on the road, cd version is also anti brad pittian, and antideluvian.......ah my bageled lox are here..time to twist and bend my alexandered wrist..i
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Re: Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay |
19-Aug-02/12:56 PM |
Pehaps you are the midget chick from poltergeist? if you fondel your medicine bag with your nipples teped down and your diaphram on your forehead wearing your father's briefcase as a tucks medicated pad, your magic will travel farther faster.
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Re: Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom |
19-Aug-02/12:42 PM |
It's a much more sticky puddle now Doug. I am proud on this Monday to share in the modesty of the more shady 'real' side of your Christianity. Now what should we do about the muslims? I know, I have a submission in mind. It reads like a japanese migrane bullet train now doug. 9/10. Cuz I love psycho analyzing christian humanist (Bachus was reared in parochial schools)l
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Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/1:55 AM |
this has gotta be da or z or settle, playing around right...come on people..this is borderlne disturbing. da please tell me you're gonna jump out of the cake...right? if not i'll never stick up for a blonde being stereo typed again, or stick one period for that matter
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Re: I SHALL NOT by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/1:52 AM |
to read everynight with your child..
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Re: odd star by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/1:51 AM |
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Re: devil by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/1:50 AM |
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Re: I SHALL NOT by pitchblackdisaster |
19-Aug-02/1:49 AM |
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