Re: Mors Omnia Solvit by shit	29-Jul-04/9:46 PM
Christ, that was bleak... What the fuck is wrong with you? Pickled?
Re: I Dream..... by frdup717	29-Jul-04/9:47 PM
Death by vagina.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jul-04/9:48 PM
"mostly long gone." lose 'long' when you edit next.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jul-04/9:50 PM
And how you can insert Birch trees into a contemporary vagina monologue is appalling, not that I can spell appaling, but I think I took a clean drunk stab at it.
Re: Fragile by QuirkyWonder	29-Jul-04/9:52 PM
oh dear that was like squashed emo droppings, totally gross, you fucking SUCK!
Re: Counting seconds for blowing this world up by Prince of Void	29-Jul-04/9:54 PM
That was a skid mark, really, did the world lie to you son? Pull up your britches, and learn to lie better.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jul-04/9:57 PM
I've seen smattered bug strewn across nine hour road tripped windows with more sole, you cad.
Re: The recovery room by katinchina	29-Jul-04/10:18 PM
The Kitchen ( A Free curse) By Capt. Napkin Fat eyes pleading Plump hands reaching out Obese gravy stuffed dumplings Lifeless Pugeot smells of life drinking spirits Plummish smells of deaf defeated pots and pans Old crapes on sheets, old flour on him Nectarine hair, bloating rumps "The illusion of health and food full bellies"? A cornucopia of...Corn... Starving for pop Still clinging to aluminum, clamoring for salt "The smell of death I met miles outside"? Inside, the Kitchen gleamed with new dishes to break my momma tongue against like a wounded seal on the dingy of infidelity, and a filthy floor.
Re: MY HEART REMEMBERS by massangel62	30-Jul-04/1:56 PM
I came to read this because I thought your name was 'massangil' like the douche.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Aug-04/11:21 PM
I was born and raised in the San Gabriel mountains.
Re: Surfer by INTRANSIT	17-Aug-04/11:23 PM
Ripped
Re: Guess the place! by Patsy	17-Aug-04/11:31 PM
Is it Uranus?
Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry	18-Aug-04/6:53 AM
Epic
Re: Mephistophelian Seductress by SupremeDreamer	29-Aug-04/2:31 AM
Sounds like a threnody.
Re: He by BigB	30-Aug-04/11:02 AM
"But you never did came"? Good one, very Arkansass.
Re: Out goes the baby with the garbage by INTRANSIT	30-Aug-04/11:08 AM
Far out.
Re: The Room by darylchew	30-Aug-04/11:25 AM
Jesus
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Sep-04/12:07 PM
Maybe... You do realize that this is the same poem you've been writing to your Dad, Jesus, your boyfriend, and the rapists for some time now.
Re: Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry	8-Sep-04/12:09 PM
A roaring flea.
Re: Coldfront by klosterfobik	11-Sep-04/5:35 PM
go