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Re: Gifts by miraclemaker 19-Dec-03/11:54 AM
Thank's for the advice, we all have our styles and I'am new at this, "Trips everywhere and anywhere imaginable," I write about that my Trips. mind, creativity,and a lot of passion,into your heart
if you allow it and the heart's of others. NO Permission to leave is the freedom that an aquarian soul like me needs to stay and express my "gifts"
of creativity.Thanks for putting your words out in the univerce..happy holidays.A 10

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Re: Pyrrhus smoked the sun by SupremeDreamer 19-Dec-03/2:23 AM
Your Modus operendi, thrills me to the core really.
A "mime" speaking in silence, but yet penetrating
the mind, with azure recolections of what it was,
as with a piercing of a spear.Bravo a 10+

Re: The generosity of others. by darby pyn 13-Dec-03/12:48 PM
I'am flatered by your most gratus comment...may i set the mood?I'll take of B.holliday" and put on "give it away now" by t.r.hot chili pepp's.I love your verse I will borrow a bit to put light on your voyerism you have my 'perssimon' to enter the realm any time.Dizzy from the icy smoke coated player's,diamond crotches,& gold plated card pay the rent..again.Manicured widowssucking on elated but almost dead "mates".Well dressed in sin he's mothers heart does beat within he's own.He will make more $$than bin ladin,publishing he's circumcision, and yes he's beloved Jocastas jealus son /scor. A tooth like decision.So untwist the noose and chag the messenger like h. kissinger under the misttletoe. your's get's a 10 I gott to run to south beach and get my claws manicured MEEEAAOOOW, for now.
Re: Use Me by dragonfly 13-Dec-03/12:43 AM
Aheeemm..My brother sat me right down and he talked to me ,"about all this use me stuff" I sayd brother if y
you only knew if it feeeeels this good getting used..
you know the rest of this song...let me feeel why tough you are letting this s.o.b.use you up and how goood it feeels to you child...are you with me* 8.
Re: diamond of love by crwncka1 13-Dec-03/12:10 AM
Hello my name is walter and i'am a sheisteeer,a demon, a pshyco,an recovering assasin,a detoxed pilot of god!
"Heeey walter"..we came to beleive...yep.fa la la la la la la la happy unholydays..our men we love them so. ju
Re: Head. by darby pyn 13-Dec-03/12:03 AM
Awwww girrrrll you had to go there didn't sha?That''seedy'' sermon should never touch your lips unless it was angelic revelation in c minor heh..heh..you is a lil devil.That should always have a reservation, at the very least an open one!
Re: Night and day. by darby pyn 12-Dec-03/11:54 PM
Lets have one toghether* Cheers good worck.
I dont like to think about it either but...the lobster was good, so was the stephen king..I'll drink to that!
Re: Rustling Wind by laura2224rn 9-Dec-03/11:05 PM
you get a 9. for the elegance as oposed to hobos in 8t's hood. The contrast is finese, style and grace.
It's 2 a.m. and I'm of to dream with that vision in your poem thank you.A promice we all forget about at times.
Re: Urban Nights by capachijim 9-Dec-03/10:54 PM
WHY be blue this is good.Neon lighting by nature a 10
Re: Painting the Town by dragonfly 9-Dec-03/8:55 PM
Some actions and words can leave you *spechless* Scent
isnt it so true like gingerbread,morning coffe-
dawn lingering in the air of course can be very INVIGORATING in an open market say medellin.
and compared to a stroll in buenos aires at the same hour..thank's for the visual of the web & the fly.
and to relive a few moments of my own.Keep leaving
me bread crumb's straight to you'r poems. CHEERS to your holidays.
Re: No delusions. by darby pyn 8-Dec-03/12:03 PM
How did I miss this sensitive poem, like the last 3 #s on my cmputer 151 I must of had one too many shots of it we celebrate all the rest of the year..I got my head clear now a jump in the ocean and fresh guava passion fruit xtra vitamins smoothy will do that. I reeeealy like this Yes karma is eternal but some souls are worth it. Under radar you must have your own radar better than a hoary bat to pull this of being able to pull it of you must feel the intruders body heat from afar have acute hearing be very brave and in love not just lust cuz you can get thaty at any grocery store.
If you knew it all alonf no respect you must have a surplus of the stuff..I COMAND respect lick my high heels NOW!!I dont have any regrets but I want a laaarge bed, rose petals and a "family jewel encrusted septer" for at least 24 hours ,skip the couc,-
the kitchen,sink keep the toasies they don't stink!!!BRING IT On santa baby!!!!XXXXa whisper te amo is not enough. a 10
Re: Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer 8-Dec-03/8:59 AM
Lets not kill each other for now lets wayt till va
I liked your bravadoelentines day massacre 04. Hatred grrrrrr so passionate...There's more weed...kiss the stubborn sob I got one he's my pop's and hades was so afraid of letting him in that death turned it's back got paid of by satan. he survided a 11 hour operation, pulled he's breathing and nasal/g tube's out no -shit in intensive care /and is now meaner than ever..those pale as blue ice eyes of he's mean bussiness/ walking talking and kicking the doct's asses Kiss and love the ole bastard till v-day chucle. have a great xmas hope santa brings you some maui wowie or kauai electric. a 9
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik 8-Dec-03/8:46 AM
Was the monk my" saint" Rasputin/you are a Hungarian gypsy by blood can't get a transfusion.Think I found your soul clinging to mine on an agust night..This is more like you Passionate,bohemian,walking,thinking composing.Tarot the morning star.Ahhhhh holding it in the fresh dirt/musky smell of the grave yard arousing to those of us who have a pulse.This poem is fine and you are forever MINE. more than a nine 10
Re: never come down by Freethinker1602 8-Dec-03/8:19 AM
Sooooo you liked the lip biting comment I do have a special cognizance and only IF [I like you alot and you taste divine.. BIG SMILE] On lip or bites of all kinds hard it depends on the moment but Lucy my brow is arched, it's the unholy days so here you go one for each jugular not toooo hard, and a nip for that upper lip since I got the bottom one last time gigle's.
I-sis the morning star is shining, you have little faint lavender bites on your sevres shoulders.leaving the fragrance of MYHRR,a dash of sulfur you love that hmmm? and gardenia my calling card I will dance thru your balcony like a bachante and disapear till next time as you sleep.Your comment was on 11/29 I was in Orcus with my mau [egyptian cat spotted striped.] you where in Paris?lol.Are you feeling dicrotic poor devil.
Drop the fear i go south like most godesses in the winter i'll come back to hold you tight and bite you harder wink..a 10
Re: Winter Lands: I by http://bandgeek 7-Dec-03/10:24 PM
Yikes soooo glad I'm no where near any of that till after xmas I caould harly handle california..with out a human fur coat a few blankets and alot of what wet dreams become a reality. I;30 am and the warm breeze is fluttering my satin robe...sigh keep your cats warm, and thanks for the well writen reminder of why I dont like real winter's. Best wishes to you and a hot apple cider my friend cheers.I need to sleep with only one silk sheet and no dry heat,that makes my nosebleed yuck. A 10 and to all a goood night!
Re: Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy 7-Dec-03/9:17 PM
ahhhh love,amore I've only tasted the ambrosia of this orchis/family but once [I mean the taste of love real love]it gave me asthenia.I am a godess so i recovered a bit quicker.I even lived in orcus because of it. My own creation..same birth mark distinguish from others characterize, make clear,boundary,mine. yet another century he is my bezel.Real love is eternal "Live as if you were to die tommorow.learn as if you were to live forever"
Mahatma Gandhi. this touched my diamond hard heart a 9
Re: Why you don't fall through the floor by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 7-Dec-03/8:42 PM
A xmas cock-tail to beat all Quantum pressure , tall frosty glass the only normalisation factor in this concoction ahem..2 shots of bacardi rum 151 better yet
will make it really elemental for this holiday season no need to invite the neighboors they will get a lil -bit wink..ahem quantro what the hell..be generous, all the stolish you want. As 33 a dash,H1 yep,He2 what the hell laugh a bit,N7 a bit expensive but why not,Pu94 a
pinch of criptonite you'll fly anyhow just to be sure extra momentum now don't bother to shake, make it pretty and light it. pressureP=Boom now that's how to be a particle in a box happy reincarnation!!I'll drink eggnog with a shot of 151 hold the extras, a quantum 10
Re: xxxmas by kingit 6-Dec-03/8:24 PM
are magotts larvae..are silk worms larvae? well dunno im sooo happpy now i can swimm to key largo and drag J.Mannings chewed up corpus delictai.. and not feel the weight of hes deer punctured ass.Cheers to you i will drink to that xmas mess an happy new year..got's to go and dance, my sexy smooth, stand up and take notice, peachy clean untouched ass till the brake of dawn and then some. & I will kick your's Manning from one side of the missi to honolulu! I"ll drink to that..
in company of my friends who are waiting on you santa's lil helpers...come on down.
Re: Fireworks on an Open Sky by capachijim 6-Dec-03/8:11 PM
That how i felt when I loved my only love at dawn.dimed all th lights the heat brought out the auras like fireworks.. But dark is not bad..as you wait upon the next heat in the tall savanah grass my tiger eyes dream and paint the sky with past lavender, blue,gold ,red as fire filled dawns. Thanks it's a 10
Re: Thankless by shadowaura 6-Dec-03/8:03 PM
You can do better things with mirrors..get your lover in on it {smile}all you have left is a mess but if you love him lick it of..then use windex on that mirror happy is a great state of mind, at least for 10 minutes
merry xmas.a 8


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