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No delusions. (Free verse) by darby pyn sweat sugar and let me taste your pores. get drunk and smoke be my
favorite mistake. be a photograph disguised as a bookmark. be a question
I never answer. we never lied after sex connected in the shower with
the radio screaming , sharing a cigarette on the balcony
starring at nothing in silence. talk is cheap. we were all about action,
and satisfaction. no regrets. in social circles we hid like
thieves. stealing are moments behind the trees.
in a forest of rumors we heard them all then watched
them fade like leaves in fall.. under the radar below the chin
when he was gone I came right in. I felt cold that I didnât care.
karma is eternal. just a heartache away. in his bed, inside his wife.
I can feel his steel, his stare a knife. but he never knew your
secret life. I am the other man. a whisper a glance. you
like the excitement too much to advance. it will never last.
I knew it all along. no delusions, no regrets.
no feelings. no respect.
Up the ladder:
Understanding
Down the ladder:
Drinking before noon with Bukowski
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Posted: December 5, 2003 9:18 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2003 11:29 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4365 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.116.54
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5-Dec-03/10:16 PM
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As it is with carajou.
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Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177
> Bachus
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6-Dec-03/5:46 AM
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Hey, ah - what's a carajou?
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
> Shuushin
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6-Dec-03/12:01 PM
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I think he meant carcajou, it's a wolverine.
Interesting format, and I like the words/mood. I think it wants to be more though. Longer - stick a vaccuum pump on it.
Thanks shuushin. this poem is a work in progress. I want to
add more I'm gonna work on it.
How did I miss this sensitive poem, like the last 3 #s on my cmputer 151 I must of had one too many shots of it we celebrate all the rest of the year..I got my head clear now a jump in the ocean and fresh guava passion fruit xtra vitamins smoothy will do that. I reeeealy like this Yes karma is eternal but some souls are worth it. Under radar you must have your own radar better than a hoary bat to pull this of being able to pull it of you must feel the intruders body heat from afar have acute hearing be very brave and in love not just lust cuz you can get thaty at any grocery store.
If you knew it all alonf no respect you must have a surplus of the stuff..I COMAND respect lick my high heels NOW!!I dont have any regrets but I want a laaarge bed, rose petals and a "family jewel encrusted septer" for at least 24 hours ,skip the couc,- the kitchen,sink keep the toasies they don't stink!!!BRING IT On santa baby!!!!XXXXa whisper te amo is not enough. a 10 190 view(s)
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