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never come down

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

I just think of you Then I feel that we Will always have tonight To remember tomorrow I love to think about you It strikes fear into me To realise that I don't want For you to go away Hold my hand wait for me I haven't run that far ahead You're all I want to see After it's been such a bad day Don't you think for an instant That you mean anything less to me You are my breath so I can walk If I get old and jaded I'll smile again You've always helped me and with you I've never felt the fear of uncertainty I love you today and forever I never told you my love was undying Now I keep my silence It hurts Come back to me, hold me tight I stare at the wall where your picture was Come back to me

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[n/a] Lucifer 22-Mar-03/1:56 PM Reply

grr no one else has read this...

[8] Carvaceous 25-Mar-03/2:30 PM Reply

Someone once told me we're too young to fall in love...I think I'll go slap that someone now.

[n/a] Freethinker1602 › Carvaceous 25-Mar-03/11:49 PM Reply

mainly me. I said it. I just wanted it to be too young. we shouldn't fall in love. it screws every thing up and then when you see the person or hear them talk it is magically ok

[10] The_Third_Isis 8-Dec-03/8:19 AM Reply

Sooooo you liked the lip biting comment I do have a special cognizance and only IF [I like you alot and you taste divine.. BIG SMILE] On lip or bites of all kinds hard it depends on the moment but Lucy my brow is arched, it's the unholy days so here you go one for each jugular not toooo hard, and a nip for that upper lip since I got the bottom one last time gigle's.
I-sis the morning star is shining, you have little faint lavender bites on your sevres shoulders.leaving the fragrance of MYHRR,a dash of sulfur you love that hmmm? and gardenia my calling card I will dance thru your balcony like a bachante and disapear till next time as you sleep.Your comment was on 11/29 I was in Orcus with my mau [egyptian cat spotted striped.] you where in Paris?lol.Are you feeling dicrotic poor devil.
Drop the fear i go south like most godesses in the winter i'll come back to hold you tight and bite you harder wink..a 10