poemranker ::Head. by darby pyn

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Free verse № 77502

Head.

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Dec 2003 · Edited 10 Dec 2003 · 5 comments

Look at me. never close your eyes. soft pupils with a language all their own. eyebrow motion, squints, a conversation made of muscle fluctuations more profound than noise more like telepathy. soft lips closed tight, wet, drowning in you. the coarse gaps of gasps for air. undeterred, determined if not for love then control. hands grip the back of my upper thigh hard like griping a bridle with sharp slaps close to the finish. a chorus of evangelical praise breaks through my teeth. a greedy sermon hungry for donations. squeezing every last breath from me. I succumb. my legs too stiff to fall. I’m not a sadist who thinks love is a fist. I regain my composure, kneel and kiss you with no reservations.

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[9] SupremeDreamer 10-Dec-03/8:33 PM Reply
Nice poem- but the title? sucks. Unfortunately I can not suggest anything better. Blessed with nine.
[n/a] darby pyn › SupremeDreamer 10-Dec-03/8:43 PM Reply
thanks dreamer. I was hesitating to put this one on.
glad you like it.
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Dec-03/2:37 PM Reply
Yuck dude, that's nasty.
[n/a] darby pyn › <{Baba^Yaga}> 11-Dec-03/6:13 PM Reply
is it the kiss at the end that leaves a bad taste in your mouth baba. yeah I knew that would
get some response.
[n/a] The_Third_Isis 13-Dec-03/12:03 AM Reply
Awwww girrrrll you had to go there didn't sha?That''seedy'' sermon should never touch your lips unless it was angelic revelation in c minor heh..heh..you is a lil devil.That should always have a reservation, at the very least an open one!