Re: Send The Devil... by horus8	7-Feb-06/7:03 PM
i read the long poem of how mom trys to ruin u on poem ranker, what is that. Is it true? i hope not that would be mal. i lo v loved you cause you were my teacher and i the squire. this sucks i hope your a liar. i came out the hospital, a couple months ago in hawaii now im in california again. i od on ice, now i just live life in a criogenic dream im sorry but please tell me the truth of the matter when me and mom lived there. i missed you, i want to miss you again.
Re: a comment on thor an his hammer by baphomet	20-Nov-03/8:11 PM
well i appreciate your comment and ur vote. i know that i mispelled words but i wanted to write freely and carlessly. i wrote wat ever came to mind. i was at my grandmothers house and i went down to the libary to use a computer. there was no spell check and i didnt feel the need to go an edit anything i typed it in the last 5 minutes of libary comp time. i pressed submit and let it go. any ways thanks i hear ur a editor or something to do with a magazine. so i respect ur comment.
Re: a comment on thor an his hammer by baphomet	19-Nov-03/2:33 PM
because do to the fact of different changes and different birds on my window cill telling me different notions i think that i want to go back to hawaii. 1.i really miss my family. 2.some of my family members are about to pass off to a better place, but frankly i would like to see them before they do. another reason i know that u will always be there and i can always find u. u are strong and will live for many more years, but some of my other family wont. i am grateful for every thing u hav done. 1.giving a job at daves for writing so i could earn a computer . 2. that u would always give my support and be proud of me when i would accomplish jobs. 3.i've learned all sorts of new things and skills on the computer and in life. but i dont think i should grow up in a enviroment where every one wants a piece of me. i know that u would protect me on every side but i also need protection from above and below. even though that might not always be true most of the time theres a price for every thing. i loved the stay and i will come back one day. im grateful for the eye opener and the camera because im goning to be a photogropher for surfing and models in bikinis.lol also i respect u and know that u would do the best for me. any ways this poem was not about my mom nore my *cogh*daD even though he is an addict.and i dont want the proplems off an addict he is always some where other than by me so i know i would not see the addictive personality. i dont enjoy seeing my family on speed=crystal horse=herion or snow=coke i dont care about the simple drugs as long as there no abused and not changing them. i still hav hope for him lol thank god mums stronger and still the iorn fist and the gently heart and healing hand. im not going to live with my fassha im going to live in my house supervised by my aunt and family. i dont care about all the glame an glits i love my mom even though she couldnt get me all those expensive toys but still she gave me the gift off travel. im getting a stable education in hawaii and if bill wants me to get the best he can start a college fund. i apperciate the love from all of u. i'm thankful every one around me to show me the good the bad and the ugly. "my mom has guided me to see this in my travcels" and and she loves both of us equally. i dont feel scorned but if i have been it would have strengthen me. the most powerful demi-god in the hawaiian belief is the worm. well thank u for the feeling of always having a perch to go to in hollywood. as r governator would say"i'll be back" and i will to model. take a break from ur emac and come take a trip to hawaii. oh im coming home to night see u then. aloha i gotta go the libary computer minutes is running out. ciao la vella mom loves u more then me so be nice she loves u so much she cries when ur not happy. she misses her lion. damn people never wanna hug a fish. bye love u see u later. latwes
Re: It was... by Shardik	19-Nov-03/11:34 AM
i wonder where u got "it was . . ." from? *cough**there was...**cough*
Re: The Balcony Boys by Shardik	16-Nov-03/6:15 PM
"all i ever wanted was to pick apart the day and put it back together my way" aseop rock
Re: I AM THE BEST by ____________________	5-Nov-03/10:15 PM
Fred Durst is just another piece of work and wastes are oxygen. And you, are an idiot who wasted my time reading this crap.
Re: Kiss Me by josiefiend	30-Oct-03/4:43 PM
you also have a thing for bleeding and chests. ? 8
Re: Love Poem by josiefiend	30-Oct-03/4:41 PM
you hav a thing with the word glossy. ? 8
Re: Burn for Her by josiefiend	30-Oct-03/4:40 PM
G good but generic still good.
Re: Fireworks by josiefiend	30-Oct-03/4:37 PM
wat about the bottle rockets?
Re: Thee of most shiny belt buckles by <{Baba^Yaga}>	30-Oct-03/4:35 PM
gizard on a skilet, yummmmmmm.
Re: This Beat Is Technotronic by Ya Kid K	30-Oct-03/1:50 PM
Hmmm? well? uh? ok then . . .
Re: Rape by titan69	30-Oct-03/1:43 PM
I also like the ones with one tooth, to give some friction.
Re: a comment on Voyeur looking glass by baphomet	30-Oct-03/1:40 PM
ok ur mom is Mrs. Schwiser?
Re: When my poems go platinum by horus8	26-Oct-03/8:48 PM
app. great title, i loved the way it shot out. 10>?<:?:LK:"?>?"
Re: untitled # 3 by noonewantstobealone	26-Oct-03/8:41 PM
(TEAR)hit home,SOB 6?><ouy
Re: untitled # 2 by noonewantstobealone	26-Oct-03/8:38 PM
oh let me guess, Inspired by the time Fifi went in the car motor for heat. 4<>gj
Re: untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone	26-Oct-03/8:33 PM
what a great poem was this inspired by ur ran over dog Fido . 4.ioih
Re: scenestealer by crin	26-Oct-03/7:11 PM
Hmmm:? okay thats enough, it's very . . . well use your imagination. enough said cheereyo lllll. . .
Re: There's a meteor showers before today's crucifixion by The_Third_Isis	26-Oct-03/7:03 PM
very good moth I praise you with a limited adition mint pat on the back. 10 patpatpat