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Rape (Free verse) by titan69
She screemed and she struggled. But nobody heard her. She screemed and she struggled. But nobody heard her cry. She sceemed and she struggled. As her nails gathered dirt that she scraped from the foor. He did what he did ,and slipped away. leaving her in the park. in the dark. She will not screem. She will not struggle NO MORE!!!!!


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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3
Weighted score: 4.65
Overall Rank: 12294
Posted: October 27, 2003 2:26 PM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 2:26 PM PST
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Comments:
[0] Bachus @ 24.126.116.54 | 27-Oct-03/7:44 PM | Reply
I often rape the elderly.
[1] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.15 > Bachus | 28-Oct-03/5:08 AM | Reply
Well, the toothlessness should be put to its best use.
[3] baphomet @ 24.126.116.54 | 30-Oct-03/1:43 PM | Reply
I also like the ones with one tooth,
to give some friction.
[n/a] titan69 @ 213.48.74.56 | 3-Jan-04/1:03 AM | Reply
what sort of shity commenting is this????????
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 3-Jan-04/1:30 AM | Reply
Yeah, well... It parallels the writing.
[n/a] the codeine kid @ 217.159.74.253 > horus8 | 2-Jun-04/1:47 PM | Reply
parallels!!!
[n/a] titan69 @ 62.31.23.28 > the codeine kid | 2-Jun-04/3:01 PM | Reply
yer this horus8 seems to think my stuff is? yer well i carnt understand that ether!
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