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brown is the eat feminine deoderant gross and stuff mmm styrofoam right? (Free verse) by skaskowski i see that you see undersea
but you will redo polygamy
i see the
shooting starfish of hope
and i make a wish on the fleeting moment of
ecstacy
Up the ladder:
Rape
Down the ladder:
Second Class?
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.6429043 Overall Rank: 12301 Comments:
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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I just don't get you. This title is almost the pretentious brain-babble of my mother's used tampons....
If this poem had a more "mature" title, like "Underwater Dreams of the Heart" it would be in the best section. It's vague, meaningless and sentimental enough.
I love you, will you marry me? I've been wading through so much unbelievable mundane trivia these peon's call "poetry" Bless you. 10/10
sure, i'll marry you. then we can have kids with such names as "iskser" and "mommy"
For a while I thought, "Why bother going around and posting 'I don't get it' everywhere."... but It's worth a shot. What's going on here?
duh! it's my emotions transposed into text. or rather, uh, not actually. it was all written on a note i coughed up one day. man, that note was mucousy.
So children that concludes our moment with skaskowski one of the most underappreciated poets on poemranker. Her poetry rocks, your sucks, rocks, sucks, rock, suck,roc, suc rocsu, and that will be the title of our new gym shoe 'rocsu' we will over throw nike. goodbye, next week we will feature the work of Settle 'the mang or the smythe?'.
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