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brown is the eat feminine deoderant gross and stuff mmm styrofoam right? (Free verse) by skaskowski
i see that you see undersea but you will redo polygamy i see the shooting starfish of hope and i make a wish on the fleeting moment of ecstacy

Up the ladder: Rape
Down the ladder: Second Class?

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6363635
Weighted score: 4.6429043
Overall Rank: 12295
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
I just don't get you. This title is almost the pretentious brain-babble of my mother's used tampons....
[2] nentwined @ | 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM | Reply
I so totally can not make sense of the title. :) Hmm. Yep, really can't make sense out of the poem either. kinda silly, but not silly enough, and not sure if it's even meant to be (silly).
[2] nentwined @ | 19-Mar-02/12:32 PM | Reply
this is just kinda lame. not sure what you were trying for, but I'd guess you were trying for lame. so with that, kudos, but...?
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 11-Aug-02/9:59 PM | Reply
If this poem had a more "mature" title, like "Underwater Dreams of the Heart" it would be in the best section. It's vague, meaningless and sentimental enough.
[10] god'swife @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Aug-02/11:12 PM | Reply
I love you, will you marry me? I've been wading through so much unbelievable mundane trivia these peon's call "poetry" Bless you. 10/10
[n/a] skaskowski @ 206.69.163.59 > god'swife | 15-Sep-02/9:08 PM | Reply
sure, i'll marry you. then we can have kids with such names as "iskser" and "mommy"
[n/a] Shin-Bojangles @ 198.164.188.127 | 22-Aug-02/11:30 PM | Reply
For a while I thought, "Why bother going around and posting 'I don't get it' everywhere."... but It's worth a shot. What's going on here?
[n/a] skaskowski @ 206.69.163.59 > Shin-Bojangles | 15-Sep-02/9:10 PM | Reply
duh! it's my emotions transposed into text. or rather, uh, not actually. it was all written on a note i coughed up one day. man, that note was mucousy.
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-May-03/9:51 AM | Reply
So children that concludes our moment with skaskowski one of the most underappreciated poets on poemranker. Her poetry rocks, your sucks, rocks, sucks, rock, suck,roc, suc rocsu, and that will be the title of our new gym shoe 'rocsu' we will over throw nike. goodbye, next week we will feature the work of Settle 'the mang or the smythe?'.
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