Fireworks

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Oct 2003 · 3 comments

Today I feel like fireworks, Exploding cherry red and sweet. Rouge for the night sky, I burst open like roses And my exaltation cannot be ignored! All Eyes watch, glossy, as I glow like fireflies Fashioned by Eros. It's a shame such a display Requires someone to light the fuse

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[4] baphomet 30-Oct-03/4:37 PM Reply

wat about the bottle rockets?

[6] Shardik 30-Oct-03/7:36 PM Reply

Suicide is no option. Think before you stink.

[7] titan69 1-Nov-03/12:25 PM Reply

I explod my firework all the time !!
And ilight my own fuse?