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Fireworks (Free verse) by josiefiend Today I feel like fireworks,
Exploding cherry red and sweet.
Rouge for the night sky,
I burst open like roses
And my exaltation cannot be ignored!
All Eyes watch, glossy, as
I glow like fireflies
Fashioned by Eros.
It's a shame such a display
Requires someone to light the fuse
Up the ladder:
laugh again
Down the ladder:
the comet
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Posted: October 30, 2003 2:45 PM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2003 2:45 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8380 Comments:
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baphomet @ 24.126.116.54
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30-Oct-03/4:37 PM
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wat about the bottle rockets?
Suicide is no option. Think before you stink.
I explod my firework all the time !!
And ilight my own fuse? 149 view(s)
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