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Snowy evening (Free verse) by faisalzahoor
The memory of my old days
Sweet and sour in tastes
Was weeping in snowy evening.
The evening among bare and tired trees.
The trees those were looking gloomy
As Gloomy as the old men in grief.
The old men having mysterious stories.
The wind was blowing as
The ghosts were flying in moan.
The moan on belovedâs silent death.
The snow was falling
Over dark lonely path.
The path which was familiar with
Your silent foot steps.
The sadness of snow was
Mingling with my heartâs voice.
The voice which has your lost shadows.
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Posted: November 28, 2003 5:03 PM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 5:03 PM PST
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