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scenestealer (Free verse) by crin
i hope you come soon because this temptation is growing i hope to hear from you soon i admit i'm feeling nervous i'm sitting here waiting for collisions and near misses all i need are your hands all i need is for you to come kick the door in there's a symphony playing underneath the dialogue of this scene all my plans have been made now i'm just waiting to see if you'll hit your mark at center stage

Up the ladder: chlorinated
Down the ladder: They that do not scream

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5427
Posted: October 25, 2003 3:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2003 3:38 PM PDT
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[5] baphomet @ 24.126.116.54 | 26-Oct-03/7:11 PM | Reply
Hmmm:? okay thats enough, it's very . . . well
use your imagination. enough said cheereyo
lllll. . .
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