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scenestealer (Free verse) by crin
i hope you come soon
because this temptation is growing
i hope to hear from you soon
i admit i'm feeling nervous
i'm sitting here waiting
for collisions and near misses
all i need are your hands
all i need is for you to come kick the door in
there's a symphony playing
underneath the dialogue
of this scene
all my plans have been made
now i'm just waiting to see
if you'll hit your mark
at center stage
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5387
Posted: October 25, 2003 3:38 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2003 3:38 PM PDT
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use your imagination. enough said cheereyo
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