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Kiss Me

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Oct 2003 · 8 comments

Kiss me like strawberries overripe, so sweet they bleed summer, and take a piece of me with you Kiss me like secrets shyly, so precious to you alone, filled with a passion for keeping Kiss me like lightning, shocking, and hot enough to melt your heart and soul in your chest But above all, Kiss me, and often

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[9] kingit 30-Oct-03/3:05 PM Reply

I'm cauterized & hard...you busy later?

[n/a] josiefiend › kingit 30-Oct-03/4:16 PM Reply

Jeez, aren't we forward? hehe

[8] baphomet 30-Oct-03/4:43 PM Reply

you also have a thing for bleeding and chests.
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[5] Shardik 30-Oct-03/7:16 PM Reply

This poem is to american poetry what farming is to terrorism.

[6] Shuushin › Shardik 31-Oct-03/3:38 PM Reply

I was thinking the same thing, except instead of american poetry it was gekos and instead of farming it was the invention of indoor plumbing and instead of terrorism it was vanilla pudding.

[6] Shuushin 31-Oct-03/3:40 PM Reply

eh. kind of grossed me out - all that blood and seared flesh.

[9] titan69 1-Nov-03/11:34 AM Reply

know change kiss for fuck!!
thats better.

[10] sliver 11-Nov-03/8:40 PM Reply

very well put, I liked it. a big fat ten from yours truly. peace