Re: a comment on Why by J.B. Manning	8-Sep-03/10:31 AM
Joe's just pissed cuz I dissed his weak ass poetry. That and he hates men who like sex with men because he confuses it with his father having sex with him. Not the same thing Joe, sorry. Get over it, it's in the past...move on...you're special...REALLY. No body thinks less of you for enjoying your fathers questing interest in you. :-)
Re: a comment on cold sonnet by <~>	5-Sep-03/3:51 PM
I can too. lol. I wouldn't define it as drivel though.
Re: a comment on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge	5-Sep-03/3:40 PM
Dark you can go sit on this poem man. Or maybe you and your chrissy bitches are out burning more innocent people and calling them witches. Too busy to admit that what you really enjoy is a good book shuved up your ASS!
Re: cold sonnet by <~>	4-Sep-03/4:58 PM
I did like some of it, but I agree, it was a bit wordy and I had trouble staying focused through the middle of it...too much going on.
Re: Plum diggity by tadpole	4-Sep-03/4:53 PM
hmmmmm
Re: A Poem For World Peace. by GAY AS FU*K	4-Sep-03/4:32 PM
How old are you? If you're like 12, this is a great poem. Good thoughts and I agree with your motivation for writing it, but it's painful. right fight right fight right fight right fight.
Re: a comment on The One and Only by J.B. Manning	4-Sep-03/4:27 PM
lol - so much religious reference on this site. It should be called holy poem ranker dot com...or some shit. lol
Re: a comment on The One and Only by J.B. Manning	4-Sep-03/4:18 PM
I appreciate your input, but you know, saying something isn't original is hardly original and really, what IS original? Everything we do has already been done in some form or fashion before...hmmm, seems like a poem in itself. haha.
Re: To a bum, by RealmOfSong	4-Sep-03/1:26 PM
I like it a lot, but I'm slightly confused by the title vs. the context. It seems more like you're talking to a familiar acquaintance of some sort, rather than a stranger on the street. Or maybe you're calling that acquaintance a loser of life? Hmm, that could be what I originally missed.
Re: a comment on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme	3-Sep-03/2:26 PM
i don't recall if I have or not. It sounds familiar, but I read so many in a day. No worries. To each his own. I enjoyed writing it.
Re: a comment on The One and Only by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/1:24 PM
haha ok
Re: a comment on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/1:23 PM
Do you mean me? I don't make "Strange" bed fellows. My boyfriend is by far one of the least, "Strange" people I have ever met.
Re: R.O.X. by InvertedEar	3-Sep-03/1:21 PM
I can't imagine what it would sound like in song, but I'm nothing of a song writer. However, it does a make beautiful rhythm as it flows through my thoughts. I like it.
Re: Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme	3-Sep-03/1:17 PM
ooooh, I love this one. allow Your mushroom brush to paint me white - Oh man, that's like the second kewlest thing I've ever heard!
Re: none by tadpole	3-Sep-03/1:07 PM
interesting. It ALMOST works really well, but there is something about the ryme that feels forced. Like, it's not exactly what you wanted to say, but the only thing you could put there to complete the rythm. I think you can do better. Good though.
Re: a comment on The One and Only by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/1:05 PM
comments with no vote? ;-)
Re: Curiously here by philthegreek	3-Sep-03/1:02 PM
hmmm. I'd say that this poem made me feel like nothing at all...just.............
Re: a comment on White Veil by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/12:54 PM
some things here are included to add that wow? What things would they be?
Re: Nitemareweaver by William Delacroix	2-Sep-03/4:52 PM
The quality of the poem isn't that great. The feeling seems to be there, but I'm not sure you're feeling what you're saying, WHEN you're saying it. As for electroman1979s comment, puke on you bible thumper.
Re: The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian	2-Sep-03/4:40 PM
I can't believe anyone would give it a ten.