| Re: Grind by INTRANSIT |
25-Nov-03/8:44 AM |
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I hope you wrote a tell all letter and placed it in a location where it could be easily found.....otherwise I would not count on seeing that epitaph any time in the foreseeable future.......
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| Re: Breeding ground. by INTRANSIT |
25-Nov-03/8:38 AM |
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Sounds like somebody cut you off on the Grand Central Parkway! Yeah some of what goes on in this city sucks but, to be honest with you, I've lived here all my life and desire to live no other place in the world. While it is true that NYC often reveals the worst possible human qualities it is also is loaded with great people doing great things every day. Unfortunately these people and their stories don't get much press so we are left only with the type of stereotype so elegantly reflected in your poem. By the way. Lady Liberty does not collect patina....she undergoes a thorough washing every six months.
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| Re: facku by J.B. Manning |
10-Oct-03/7:53 AM |
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This is one fucking big speed bump I just can't get past!! Only kidding, I would never play such a childish game with you. This work obviously did not take much effort but sometimes the best stuff we do is the shit that just comes off the top of our heads. This was amusing..And yes, I do love you...now don't be naughty..not in that way...Peace JB
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
10-Oct-03/4:43 AM |
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I think Darky is right on the money with this one. Each verse seems to take the reader off to a new place...without ever returning...it all seems so disjointed. However, the imagery and harmonic flow is outstanding. Then again, I could be an idiot and you a genius... I continue to be amused and somewhat perplexed by our preoccupation with religion...particularly the rancid descriptions of christian worship that dwell on this website. I wonder what lies at the bottom of this perverted preoccupation. With all there is to talk about..why..why..why... -10- for style -3- for substance... Remember....Starkist likes tunas that taste good not tunas with good taste.
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| Re: a comment on Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet |
9-Oct-03/3:32 AM |
Horus,
I am somewhat suprised at you. You are so serious and sensitive about your own work but so inconsiderate and so flipant about the work of others. I am ammused by it all.....having long ago past the point of taking any of the shit here seriously. I've learned a bit about you. I think you are very confused about who you are. Are you a serious artist...or are you a clown...I guess you can be both if you wish....are you a man of wisdom or are you child getting kicks out of the most simple pervsions? I've lost some respect for you my friend....please don't respond by telling me how little you care about my respect and don't try to explain or rationalize...I also am not interested in hearing your insults....it's so boring..Save the childish nonesense for some of the other kiddies on this site that you have so much fun with.
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| Re: a comment on Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet |
9-Oct-03/3:21 AM |
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You all have become soooo predictible!!! I'm getting sooo bored with it all. This kind of nonesense is so easy to do and it appeals only to the most immature.
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| Re: a comment on Trapped Rat by SupremeDreamer |
3-Oct-03/11:19 AM |
Dreamer,
I just reread the piece..I thought it said.."could walk through walls". It does dramatically change the meaning..but still good.
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| Re: Trapped Rat by SupremeDreamer |
3-Oct-03/11:15 AM |
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This is very good. Interesting how this piece might be interpreted. Some might say that the poor chap in question is a fool who cannot accept reality and spends his life running in place (and into walls!!!) On the other had, and this is how I see it, the chap here is a visionary who is not afraid to think out of the box. He does not shrug his shoulders and say "that's just the way it is, you can't do anything aobut it" Now, for sure this person is going to get more than his share of lumps in his life. He will need to be strong because he will oftenb fail and will often be the subject of ridicule and criticism. But here's the catch..every person whose ever accomplished anything truely great in their lives has approcahed the world in this manner. Perhaps I've taken this piece way beyond it's intended destination....that's just the way it touched me. Really enjoyed it! -10-
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/10:58 AM |
Horus,
I did take you up on your chalenge and visited the sites noted above. To be frank with you..your music does not appeal to me in the least..to gloomy for me. But that does not mean that is not good...it's just not for me. More importantly, I do respect you for your passion and your willingness to get off your ass and put it out there. So many people talk about their dreams and never do a damned thing to make it happen. You are obviously serious about your craft! Good for you. Now a little about your bio..Why are you so hung upon this Middle American thing. I think you have a very naive view of things. A pre-occupation with work....the need to [provide for the necessities of life have preocupied man since the beginning of time. We are not opressed because we have to work. This system of ours that you seem so critical of has, to a large degree, freed us from a 24-7 concern about basic material needs. That's why art has taken on such a dominent role in our society. We can afford to pay people to sing, dance, write, and act. Maybe the guys you were hanging with at the bar had it all right and you are the one with the clouded point of view. I know I'm rambling...I've just heard too much of the "anti-system" shit in my day...al of the explanations are just so skewed and oversimplified. Anyway, like I said..I really admire you for your go get em attitude. Keep it up...I hope you find what you're looking for.
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:33 AM |
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I meant not offense. I think sometimes we just throw stuff "out there" without much thought. Maybe ist's a product of boredom or a need for attention...I know how good your work can be and just don't feel this piece is representative of your talents. And Horus, we all have our talents...no need for self-indulging proclaimations here... P.S the last three lines of your comment above illustrates my point.
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| Re: a comment on Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:30 AM |
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I'm missing the connection here...but your statement is true. You get a b- for your insight..would have been a straight A if it had relevence.
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| Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
3-Oct-03/4:26 AM |
Horus,
I meant not offense. I think sometimes we just throw stuff "out there" without much thought. Maybe ist's a product of boredom or a need for attention...I know how good your work can be and just don't feel this piece is representative of your talents. And Horus, we all have our talents...no need for self-indulging proclaimations here...
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| Re: Fuck your fucking face monkey fucker by Bachus |
2-Oct-03/3:09 PM |
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Talent without purpose or focus is such a sad thing to witness.
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| Re: the meeting by richa |
30-Sep-03/3:20 PM |
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Rich, I trust it's me...but I gotta tell ya...ya lost me after the first line. Deep or far out...I'm not sure which one is applicable here.
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| Re: a comment on A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
30-Sep-03/3:16 PM |
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This one had me going until the last verse..you may not have crashed the car but your reference to "the consevative majority" (do you mean the "moral majority") was totally out of context and..in the end...sent this fine piece of work into a deadly tailspin. (was a 9...ended up a 6 1/2)
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| Re: a comment on Wanting by J.B. Manning |
30-Sep-03/2:44 PM |
JB,
Right on my brother...couldn't have said it any better myself!
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| Re: a comment on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
30-Sep-03/12:21 PM |
Dave,
Career? What fucking career? Poetry is not my career. And I certainly have not developed a level of skill that would warrant anyone referring to me as a "Poet". It's a hobby i just started. I'm not competing with you or anyone else on this site. You on the other had are living in a fantacy world...a world in which you play the role of a gifted "Artiest", a true "Poet" . I'm pissing in my pants as we speak. Think you're a smart ass running around crowning people on this site with "0's". Davey oh Davey what a true knucklehead you are. But I love ya anyway!
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| Re: a comment on Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/4:06 PM |
Yo Dave,
Chill out! You obviously from the berbs! Can't rap with me and Darky, we genuine hoods...know what I'm sayin? Just cause you roamin round the mall with yo pants down to yo knees and yo hat tilted like a homey don't mean you can play dat shit wit us bad ass mother fuckers. You playin wit fire white-boy. Got my back Darky?
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| Re: a comment on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/4:00 PM |
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| Re: a comment on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
29-Sep-03/3:54 PM |
Dave,
You are a funny man but you would have been better off holding it in.
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