| Re: Emotion Expression by Hostileintent |
19-Sep-03/7:41 AM |
open up.. or shrivel inwards, become dry and cracked: a mummy waiting to turn to dust.
my mother had the same kind of problem.. unable to express emotion.
The woman never looked happy (unless it was a dinner party, she was an A+ actor.. not many had a fucking clue)
blessed with eight.
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19-Sep-03/7:50 AM |
Sometimes whipping yourself with your own pen can cure many diseases.
lament and retrograde
extra-large can of raid
and lots of gatorade
Terminator Verse, Judgement Day Bitch.
8.
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| Re: A Fractured Egg Shell by newdawnfades |
19-Sep-03/8:05 AM |
HUMPTY DUMPTY JUMPED OFF THE EMPIRE STATE BUILDING
scrambled eggs for breakfast, shell fragments saved to be used as toothpicks.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Sep-03/11:10 AM |
i thought i had an obsession, your in fucking love...
two weeks from now you might be stalking him
and sneaking around the bushes of his house. lol.
talk about asskissing, you probably know the texture of his intestines by now.
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| Re: Blissful the Fungae Forest by peaceseeker |
4-Oct-03/12:15 PM |
then we tripped balls and met god
and wasnt no burnin bush- ill tell ya that!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Oct-03/5:52 PM |
... your wifes vagina has its own map?
thats really bad.
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| Re: Painted Air by New Life Drug |
4-Oct-03/5:56 PM |
... i risked falling asleep when reading this.
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Sometimes I wish
every sky could be like this
on this perfect day
Hot, warm, humid,
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hot.. warm.. ? which is it!?
elmo discusses differemt types of heat kids!
no offense..
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| Re: Hard To Tell by New Life Drug |
4-Oct-03/5:57 PM |
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5-Oct-03/9:36 AM |
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im not sure, but i think #1 might be me first haiku..
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Oct-03/10:14 AM |
well, i did say tighten the output.
its slightly anorexic.
(another micropoem.)
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| Re: "Jump or Burn" by horus8 |
6-Oct-03/11:23 AM |
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6-Oct-03/11:41 AM |
theres a thing about women and romance, really..
i never saw a man write as if he were expelling thoughts in a single sigh that melts the crowd.
then again, i though it had.. no offense, it caught me as "romance novel" at the end.
but again, thats me. heres an 8.
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| Re: My plea for fair voting. by LuckyJoe |
6-Oct-03/11:57 AM |
oh shush, your case of numeral zero fever isnt half as bad as mine, dreamer supreme was a like a magnet, supremedreamer defied gravity twice (he also has been thinkin himself unhuman, but thats another story)
the only fully operational brainmachine is Y2kSlamPoet, who has gove undercover along with my last bottle of Peket...
but alas, we are all soon going to complete our formula for creating "something out of nothings" - we have ventured into godly terrain, and yet we are brave (or stupid enough) not to worry.
I dont think apologies will suffice since there will aways be a soul that dislikes you and anything that comes from you, (everyone has to go through this.. )
stop pleading, dust off your jeans and start keeping your head up.
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| Re: Ravens Flight - Voices of Spite (My First Ever Vilanelle) by Don-Quixote |
6-Oct-03/3:37 PM |
not too bad i think.. actually, it wasnt that hard- once i grasped the flow of it.. oh well, theres going to be more since i had fun writing one.
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| Re: Trapped in a horseshoe by INTRANSIT |
6-Oct-03/3:41 PM |
yep, good- but it could use smoothening like ~ said.
heres an eight.
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| Re: The Wrath of Dan Ackroyd by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
6-Oct-03/4:28 PM |
So, on judgement day you shall deliver unto us a punchline?
shucks, all that puffin to say that? waste of wind sir, now my funny bones quiver.
heres a 7.
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| Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit |
27-Oct-03/12:56 AM |
A masterpiece of poo poetry.
let it drip. 10.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Oct-03/1:14 AM |
hrmm.. interesting ideas, now:
place, point, to whom and *drumroll*
women problems again or what?
though, it held my attention atleast, but didnt do much to feed my universe.
Blessed with 7.
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| Re: Shadows by tori |
27-Oct-03/1:18 AM |
4 darks - 5 shadows...
etc..
goddamn, this is a pimple man, the repetition amazing - sizzled me into a micro dust particle within seconds.
why dont you give it a new title? such as:
jiggsaw puzzle.
blessed with 4.
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| Re: Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
14-Nov-03/11:24 PM |
Oki- lets play the seesaw!
10!
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