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Shadows (Other) by tori
Dark shadows fill an empty forest, Empty of people, sounds, life, Dark empty shadows, made only by trees, And those too are withering, Withering to nothing but shadows, Shadows with nothing to disturb them, Nothing but the empty wind, the empty sky, the empty forest, Hollow winds, empty trees, dark forest, Dark shadows with nothing to disturb them

Down the ladder: New Leaf

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9166665
Weighted score: 6.4011955
Overall Rank: 776
Posted: October 24, 2003 6:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2003 6:07 PM PDT
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[10] Miggy @ 207.38.251.108 | 24-Oct-03/6:57 PM | Reply
This is probably the best of what you wrote so far (10)
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.63 > Miggy | 24-Oct-03/7:12 PM | Reply
And Miggy would know!!!!!!!
[7] richa @ 81.86.239.39 | 25-Oct-03/9:19 AM | Reply
cute circularity, fascinating like the telletubies
[4] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.165.98 | 27-Oct-03/1:18 AM | Reply
4 darks - 5 shadows...

etc..

goddamn, this is a pimple man, the repetition amazing - sizzled me into a micro dust particle within seconds.

why dont you give it a new title? such as:

jiggsaw puzzle.

blessed with 4.
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