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Shadows (Other) by tori

Dark shadows fill an empty forest, Empty of people, sounds, life, Dark empty shadows, made only by trees, And those too are withering, Withering to nothing but shadows, Shadows with nothing to disturb them, Nothing but the empty wind, the empty sky, the empty forest, Hollow winds, empty trees, dark forest, Dark shadows with nothing to disturb them

Don-Quixote 27-Oct-03/1:18 AM
4 darks - 5 shadows...

etc..

goddamn, this is a pimple man, the repetition amazing - sizzled me into a micro dust particle within seconds.

why dont you give it a new title? such as:

jiggsaw puzzle.

blessed with 4.




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