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Painted Air (Free verse) by New Life Drug
The sun fades faster
in this moment
as time ticks,
the light slips
Hidden under horizons
and clouds
The sky was pink,
before I blinked
my eyes it seems
So big and open
and color soaked the earth
making magenta bricks,
and purple waves
Sometimes I wish
every sky could be like this
on this perfect day
Hot, warm, humid,
and not quite blue
what a perfect end tonight
summer never stays long enough
And crickets never sing
through all four seasons
but who cares
when you've got
panoramic views like these,
I can feel my heart beat
As I breathe in
the still painted air
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Posted: October 4, 2003 2:22 PM PDT; Last modified: October 4, 2003 2:26 PM PDT
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Sometimes I wish
every sky could be like this
on this perfect day
Hot, warm, humid,
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hot.. warm.. ? which is it!?
elmo discusses differemt types of heat kids!
no offense..