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bumblebee robot (Lyric) by FreeFormFixation
a mechanical buzz approaches my ears and electronic legs alight on my skin. a hypodermic needle withdrawn and exposed plunges into my neck and releases its poison. bumblebee. with your robotic eyes and metal wings come to me and sting me so that i might fall in love with falling in love through the aid of a drug (this neurotoxin sedative) Bumblebee Robot. take me away on your erratic flight over metallic flowers and green emerald grasses. falling in love has never felt so mechanical, so man-made and inspirationally beautiful. so at the sound of that buzz i am taken away to the H.I.V.E. factory Where love is diagnosed as an illness, a biological weapon to infect the masses. Bumblebee. with your robotic eyes and metal wings come to me and sting me so that i might fall in love with falling in love through the aid of a drug (this neurotoxin sedative) Bumblebee. Buzz! Take me away on your erratic flight over metallic flowers and green emerald grasses. falling in love has never felt so mechanical, so man-made and inspirationally beautiful. When the needle pierced us in that pinprick of a moment we were caught up, stuck in a dream, having fallen in love with a terrible fever. chronically repetitive. We all sting. with your robotic eyes and metal wings come to me and sting me so that i might fall in love with falling in love through the aid of a drug (this neurotoxin sedative) Trapped by a sting. http://www.mp3.com/iliketv

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3307
Posted: September 26, 2003 2:08 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2003 2:08 AM PDT
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[7] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 195.92.67.68 | 26-Sep-03/4:54 PM | Reply
Bees are really excellent.
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