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20 most recent comments by DreamerSupreme (161-180) and replies

Re: a comment on Stone Slave by DreamerSupreme 15-Aug-03/3:04 PM
vote a ten to piss who off? horus? why would i want to do that?..
Re: A look at Horus8 by Sir.Psycho.Sexy 15-Aug-03/2:53 PM
lmao. its a war!! cool. -sits down and decided to watch-
Re: a comment on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme 10-Aug-03/12:33 AM
thats what i call "hold on a second"
repeated ever two or so minutes
;P
Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 9-Aug-03/11:11 PM
man... where the hell did you pop from lol. this arguing is turning into a novel... and it fuckin overkill, its like a poetic scene of terminator. ill keep it noted to stay far the fuck away from you lol..
Re: Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy 9-Aug-03/10:14 PM
Man.. that has to suck, doing all that for the hope to get laid, and your stuck on that highway. lol.. did you bring a dildo? heh. nice. 10.
Re: a comment on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme 9-Aug-03/10:07 PM
oh well, i was trying to add too many bells i guess. noted. thanks for the contribution of your opinion. ;)
Re: a comment on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer 9-Aug-03/10:04 PM
you would be amazed what can be done with a dictionary.. i seriously spend a good amount of time scanning over the possibilites, forming them neatly around my imagination dream galaxy into a string of pearls.. ;D

Im quite proud of my gradual but sure mastering of the dictionary.
Re: a comment on 1967 Ford Carmine Jalopy by SupremeDreamer 9-Aug-03/10:01 PM
been there? my lil fairy, i HAVE those green eyes... ;/
Re: a comment on Weeping Willow by LuckyJoe 9-Aug-03/8:12 PM
Offense to "fuck you?" lmao, yeah right my cursin ass is gonna get pissed at that.. ;P

Good you lil faery
lift them rusted blades
deliver your parry

DreamMasta is always ready
to deliver another parody
from his crooked grin

Let the irish tap-dance begin
my pretty ballerina
twirl round the arena
and show me that you
can learn to fly

No longer shall you cry
your weeping tears less
them feet cant move
theres always a cool cat
that will teach ya how to groove

or ponder how to curl those toes
and master the monkey fist
to deliver knockout blows
straight into the face
of king kong

*puff* *puff*
more pipe dreams drift from my bong
envisioning your pink dress
evolving into a tornado flower
learning bout the power
of the feathered quill
and how you can fulfill
your quest to be the best

(yeah, cliche and all, fuck it, just write it when your trien to be funny, be a clown to entertain the masses, the embarrasment will soon give way to another fiasco in the multicolored light show of our moden day poety disco..)

that felt good.. i hope you actually get better, i really hope you aint just cryin uncle to make me shut up.. ;P

Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 7-Aug-03/1:30 PM
Oh, and btw, your going to have to play chess with casper aight, cuz i got shit to do, so keep on fightin! PEACE!!!!!
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 7-Aug-03/1:21 PM
I couldnt stand up do to laughter.. look, your talking about getting physical with me over the net, and we just barely met, cmon now, i dont swing that way, and if i did, i dont bed wrestle on the first date.

Plus, you have been around the corner more times than i can count so, in the words of Dark Angel: YOUR AN AIDS INFESTED HOMO!!!

Yeah, when your no longer amused with your self healing masturbation to bandaid that gun shot wound in the center of your forehead, ill cock smack you and tell you about my collection of rubber snakes.
Re: Myopic Labotomized Hubris by Retaliate 7-Aug-03/1:17 PM
It takes a steady hand to pull the cock
against the strain so determined
to have its way

Who will grab the cock?
Who will toke the snake
so we can all get out of the car and jerk ourselves off for a fucking change?
Re: The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet 7-Aug-03/1:13 PM
A Pimple Infested Suicide Note
The Modern Day Teenage Emote
Jump Off The Boat
Into The Sea
SWIM WILLY, SWIM WILLY BE FREE!
Get That Underwater Submarine Degree
Go On That Crusade
God Knows You Paid
Tons Of Shrimp Just To Fade
Into The Deep Blue Abyss
Oh Jesu How I Will Miss
That Neurotic Navy Submarine Torpedo Man
He Was Rocketed Into A H20 Space Adventure
2001 Leagues Under The Sea, A Loser Odyssey
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 7-Aug-03/1:02 PM
OMG!!?!?! your giving me little baby blue zeros!!! how cute.. you really are pathetic.. cmon man, no sense of humor?
Re: a comment on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Aug-03/12:59 PM
Good Job!.. im still waiting for a better title, but screw it, heres a nine. hey, wutcha think of my attempt to do a horus style parody?
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 7-Aug-03/12:53 PM
WOA... "FEEBLE MIND?@?!?!?!?!?!" im devestated.. jim, pass the clit and lets inject more meth.. hey, why dont we inject the yo-yo here with meth and make him spin us a sandwhich?

I love that goodbye of yours: peace.. when your starting a war, like an idiot.. doing exactly what i want you to do.. your as predictable as a fly that flies into a bug shocker 2000.

crack, pop, sizzle, ima make you into my breakfast of rice crispeys.
Re: a comment on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Aug-03/12:33 PM
oh yeah.. pregnant, Surrounded.. you know, horus once told me a story about the difference between a mature poet and a street poet.. the gist of it was that the street poet cooks up his work in a quick rush, making an eggs benedict cooked in the shell.

The mature poet takes his time in perfecting his work, making sure it isnt a new age hardboiled egg hes dishin out..

http://www.spellcheck.net/ <- this shit works..
Re: God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Aug-03/12:28 PM
misery.. btw, the use of the enter key to perhaps shorten the length for each verse would make it neat, and easier to read, also more comprehendible (if done right)

other than that, its a very good captured emotional image. not sure about the last two lines though.

I think the title sucks.. need a better one.
overall: 8, perhaps a nine with clean up and better title.
Re: a comment on My Fart Is Eternally Yours (Free Sniff) By Yo-Yo by DreamerSupreme 7-Aug-03/11:29 AM
simply put, i just fucking hated that piece of shit he wrote, along with the other crap he posted.. so i said fuck it and thought id attempt to do a parody in the famous horus8 style.

I made myself laugh with this thing.. made me feel a thousand times better.
Re: blue lilac and I (edit) by richa 7-Aug-03/8:40 AM
a beautiful piece richa.. well done.


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