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20 most recent comments by DreamerSupreme (181-200) and replies

Re: Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8 7-Aug-03/6:40 AM
ahh.. man thats alot of crappy birthdays.. kinda like my christmas memories with the witch.. 10.
Re: a comment on The Belgian Bookworm [revised] by DreamerSupreme 7-Aug-03/6:34 AM
maybe, but i didnt want to get people confused and thinking my ending was a peon bowing continually to a fallen roman emperor.. i mean metaphor shouldnt take away from the general meaning..
Re: a comment on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Aug-03/6:26 AM
"They told me take it back
Stop speaking your mind and how you feel"

you mistaken the physical for the mental
digesting my comment with the literal
comprehension that a monkey does posses
your pink fluffy dress
is soiled from mud stains
it is all that remains
of your furry armor.


cmon man, really, you should think more about what your eyes read.
Re: Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Aug-03/2:03 AM
cmon you damned furry mammal, are you still whining about that old wound of yours?

Its time to move onto some fresh wounds. 7
Re: a comment on The Belgian Bookworm [revised] by DreamerSupreme 6-Aug-03/5:30 PM
too cute? umm.. no, actually horus that was only an inkling of the bulk of his books. Theres literally thousands of authors in that collection i still keep stacked in a ton of boxes. most of it i havent even begun to explore.. the man could read huge books in three days, even one if he was really drawn into the story.. i sometimes thought he was a machine.

btw, whats wrong with grapy ocean? ;/ i liked that line too... -sigh- well, do you have a suggestion of what would replace that perhaps?
Re: a comment on Angel by mistaric 6-Aug-03/2:39 PM
it probly made it into the front cover of the school newspaper.. bleh.. i didnt even make it to the middle of the poem when i quit reading and announced judgement.
Re: a comment on The Belgian Bookworm [revised] by DreamerSupreme 6-Aug-03/2:35 PM
Contemplation.. ah, more like my memory being replayed on paper, its an exact description of how my father would spend his nights eating dinner.

He introduced me to Clive and I am also an avid reader of his writing, he also directed me to the great works of Jean M Auel, Jonathan Kellerman, and many other wonderful authors.

I remember when i was eight, my school had this reading contest and he inspired me to read white fang.. since then i was addicted to reading, he was quite proud of it.. hrmm.. memories.. i miss that old man..

Thanks for the vote and comment, glad you enjoyed it.
Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit 6-Aug-03/1:53 PM
texan urban schizophrenic gun lust.. yeah... well written, but i think it needs, i dunno, some type of comical spicing.. it was long, and when i got to the middle i started feeling sensations of boredome.. no offense, i cant write this well (atleast not yet anyway) but im just voicing my opinion.
Re: There can be only one by Shardik 6-Aug-03/1:14 PM
highlander.. heh. 8.
Re: Angel by mistaric 6-Aug-03/1:02 PM
Eh.. cliche to the max.. and very very mushy..
Re: a comment on Puerto Rican Tequila by Don-Quixote 6-Aug-03/10:02 AM
your right... i just might seriously consider trying that suggestion.. ill see what i come up with.
Re: a comment on Pencil Dust [revised] by SupremeDreamer 31-Jul-03/8:43 AM
oki doki captain.. ill raise the damned bar then.. yikes.. with horus and you kicking me around ill be a muscle bound sailor..
Re: a comment on Cooking Class [Revised] by DreamerSupreme 30-Jul-03/12:40 AM
Ah now, i never went to cooking class.. actually.. yeah, now that i think about it i actually did, but it wasn't a vegetarian class. But i was using the whole poem as like a metaphor for writing poetry actually.. but either way its still a good read, cooking class or writing.
Re: a comment on Cooking Class [Revised] by DreamerSupreme 30-Jul-03/12:36 AM
ah, icecream. cherry cuban flavor. ;)
Re: a comment on Deranged Sailor: Sea Sickness [revised] by SupremeDreamer 28-Jul-03/7:01 PM
roger roger. ;)
Re: Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-Jul-03/4:37 PM
want some calamari with that tartar sauce? ;x 8.
Re: a comment on Cooking Class [Revised] by DreamerSupreme 28-Jul-03/4:33 PM
now now, we aint havin fish sticks. :P
Re: a comment on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8 24-Jul-03/4:14 PM
And your comments poking at me, pissing me off to make me do better.. like a deranged mentor. thanks.
Re: a comment on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8 24-Jul-03/4:13 PM
I feel much better now, thanks ;D
Re: Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus 24-Jul-03/6:22 AM
nice. 9.


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