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Cooking Class [Revised] (Free verse) by DreamerSupreme
Cuts of meat hang
clothesline style
over my fire;
smoke paints flesh
a deep ebony.
I sit, staring
at my stove
pondering spices;
wrapping bacon neatly
its grease slipping slowly
like sweat.
My knife balances
in my scarred fingers;
it lingers close to the
strings squeezing juice
into the pan.
slicing twice, I relieve
the meat's stress
and walk slowly to my table
to be Hannibal
and bite deep,
watching the blood seep
onto green grass.
Students watch my class
in horror, I smile
knowing they will remember
this summer
forever.
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Posted: July 28, 2003 4:21 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 2:08 PM PDT
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