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Free verse № 57905

Cooking Class [Revised]

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Jul 2003 · Edited 29 Jul 2003 · 6 comments

Cuts of meat hang clothesline style over my fire; smoke paints flesh a deep ebony. I sit, staring at my stove pondering spices; wrapping bacon neatly its grease slipping slowly like sweat. My knife balances in my scarred fingers; it lingers close to the strings squeezing juice into the pan. slicing twice, I relieve the meat's stress and walk slowly to my table to be Hannibal and bite deep, watching the blood seep onto green grass. Students watch my class in horror, I smile knowing they will remember this summer forever.

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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-Jul-03/4:31 PM Reply
Tar tar, 101.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-Jul-03/4:33 PM Reply
now now, we aint havin fish sticks. :P
[9] http://mulberryfairy 29-Jul-03/7:18 PM Reply
Too bad it was a vegetarian cooking class. Did you still get credit for the class? I became a vegetarian after going to a southern family reunion during which a whole pig was cooked and this, therefore brings back very nauseating vivid memories- "its grease slipping slowly like sweat" is such a perfect description, 9.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › http://mulberryfairy 30-Jul-03/12:40 AM Reply
Ah now, i never went to cooking class.. actually.. yeah, now that i think about it i actually did, but it wasn't a vegetarian class. But i was using the whole poem as like a metaphor for writing poetry actually.. but either way its still a good read, cooking class or writing.
[9] Lifeboatman 29-Jul-03/7:52 PM Reply
Juicy!!! What's for dessert?? 9...
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › Lifeboatman 30-Jul-03/12:36 AM Reply
ah, icecream. cherry cuban flavor. ;)