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20 most recent comments by nentwined (381-400) and replies

Re: Distastefully Hairy Quendo by w╞╦╩╤╦╩╣
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21-Dec-04/12:53 PM
I think the second It's should be spelled out, for rhythmic purposes.

Unless you're shouting it, then it's all clean in the wash.
Re: A smile by Bobjim 16-Dec-04/1:12 PM
It's a thing that you do with your face, when both corners of your mouth are upturned and the middle of your mouth is relatively relaxed. Sort of. Maybe.
Re: a comment on keep on digging by nentwined 9-Nov-04/1:18 PM
Better than most, then. :)
Re: a comment on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins 9-Nov-04/2:30 AM
Is there a redoubtable checkliste of colossal member-ness nowe?
Re: In the office by phauge 8-Nov-04/7:58 PM
I like s4.

death, love, pain, and loss--
these are the thoughts in my mind
while in the office
Re: Where I work by phauge 8-Nov-04/7:53 PM
go clock go. :)
Re: Down by phauge 8-Nov-04/7:52 PM
is there anything in particular you're trying to convey with this?
Re: Silly sickness by fevriere 8-Nov-04/4:51 PM
I get the overwhelmed but not much else. Guesses, but they're pretty random.
Re: a comment on keep on digging by nentwined 8-Nov-04/3:34 PM
wow. cutting they really does something. :) I'll probably do so.

I certainly didn't intend a list of diggables.

I'm glad you appreciate. :)
Re: a comment on Beyond Love by Dovina 8-Nov-04/2:23 PM
I definitely don't want a book; I wouldn't get past the first chapter before killing either the book or myself.
Re: Grandma's Prayer/Lord Reply by jroday 8-Nov-04/1:40 PM
cute last line with the setup. weak setup.
Re: Heather Graham by Bachus 8-Nov-04/1:34 PM
oy.
Re: Beyond Love by Dovina 8-Nov-04/1:31 PM
This needs more development for me. I want to experience vicariously the depths of ennui.
Re: a comment on The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins 8-Nov-04/1:12 PM
I guess I forget where I was. Next one I read was a zero as well.
Re: Daddy's Never There by angelmami17 8-Nov-04/1:11 PM
I see.
Re: The huntsman's shame by Stephen Robins 8-Nov-04/1:10 PM
congratulations. first 0 I've read in some time. :)
Re: Bad Year by Miggy 8-Nov-04/12:58 PM
I'm afraid I can't tell what you're saying here.
Re: Smoke by zodiac 8-Nov-04/12:56 PM
Head hurts, yes. Can't quite follow every line. Yet I like it greatly. I think I've got a measure of the whole of it. No suggestions on where I fall. Something to be read and re-read.
Re: Intersection by INTRANSIT 5-Nov-04/9:17 PM
hello again. :)
Re: A Fistful of Ass Haiku by HaikuMofo 22-Sep-04/2:08 PM
asstasstic.

bonus points for the form of ass, and paradox, and continuity.


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