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In the office (Free verse) by phauge
If nobody is looking we can play all day. Your eyes burn my head At work, but I'd rather be in bed. Gimmie some shelter from your loving your passion scorches me from acid rain. The polution in your soul can't hide you from the dammed. Take off your petty coat and your pants. Your post-its and your Drano are no match for my bordem. In the office these are thoughts in my mind.

Down the ladder: Remember Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.8814354
Overall Rank: 10004
Posted: November 8, 2004 6:47 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2004 6:47 PM PST
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[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 8-Nov-04/7:58 PM | Reply
I like s4.

death, love, pain, and loss--
these are the thoughts in my mind
while in the office
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.60.123 | 8-Nov-04/9:09 PM | Reply
perhaps during the hours of boredom, you might read, or, I don't know, learn how to spell? Or, here is another idea...focus on whatever task you are performing, so as not to completely fuck it up.

what is gimmie?

If only you had rhymed something with 'drano', this would have been an automatic 10
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