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Down (Free verse) by phauge Down with me
down with you
with war
with cars
with lights
with games
with pizza
with turtles
Down with stories
down with jokes
with paper
with markers
with screwdrivers
with mountains
with sitcoms
with paper cups
Down with pain
down with sorrow
with religion
with fat
with twist-tie cables
with poetry
with radio
with canned tuna
Down with me
down with you
Up the ladder:
My Life
Down the ladder:
My God
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Posted: November 8, 2004 7:36 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2004 7:36 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9602 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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8-Nov-04/7:52 PM
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is there anything in particular you're trying to convey with this?
now this i think is kinda funny and kinda good.
if only you had made the half rhyme of tuna and you a bit more obvious....still a 10 137 view(s)
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