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Daddy's Never There (Free verse) by angelmami17 Daddy's never there for me,
And I don't think it's fair.
Does he really care for me, even notice that I'm near.
he sends me money once a month.
And calls me once a week,
But that won't take the pain inside that I will always keep.
He was never there for me when I was laying in my sleep.
Wasn't even there when I lost my very first teeth.
All the other kids have daddy's but mine is alway's gone.
Because Daddy's never there, All I have is my mom!
~ME~
Up the ladder:
Being
Down the ladder:
The Wake of Your Memory
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Posted: November 7, 2004 9:40 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2004 9:40 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7619 Comments:
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angelmami17 @ 64.12.116.67
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7-Nov-04/9:41 PM
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I wrote this poem when I was like 15 I think! If you couldn't tell it's a poem about my dad. I hope you like it!
I see.
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