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thematic

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

breath hangs heavy. lips trail down. teeth meet hips. saliva drips. smells and touches. grabbing.scratching. feverish and frenzied fingers. faster. faster. longing. lingering. faster. faster. tasting. tingling. even faster. colors. shapes. worlds collide and planets shake.

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[7] kingit 13-Oct-03/3:45 PM Reply
I know how ya feel!