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thematic (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation breath hangs heavy.
lips trail down.
teeth meet hips.
saliva drips.
smells and touches.
grabbing.scratching.
feverish and frenzied fingers.
faster. faster.
longing. lingering.
faster. faster.
tasting. tingling.
even faster.
colors. shapes.
worlds collide
and planets shake.
Up the ladder:
Who I am
Down the ladder:
Memoirs of a Greasyslut the rest of the story
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Posted: October 12, 2003 11:15 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2003 11:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7615 Comments:
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kingit @ 67.69.61.91
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13-Oct-03/3:45 PM
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I know how ya feel!
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