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thematic (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
breath hangs heavy. lips trail down. teeth meet hips. saliva drips. smells and touches. grabbing.scratching. feverish and frenzied fingers. faster. faster. longing. lingering. faster. faster. tasting. tingling. even faster. colors. shapes. worlds collide and planets shake.

Down the ladder: Life and Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7615
Posted: October 12, 2003 11:15 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2003 11:15 PM PDT
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[7] kingit @ 67.69.61.91 | 13-Oct-03/3:45 PM | Reply
I know how ya feel!
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