Comments bynentwined, 581–600 back. Include replies

on Misplaced admoration by deep-as-a-puddle 17 Dec 2002, 12:58 PM
too much "forced the line to fit the rhyme". rhythm could use work.
on Trust by hobojo 17 Dec 2002, 12:56 PM
drown(ed?)

hmm. nah.
on some deleted poem 17 Dec 2002, 12:01 PM
eh?
on Various actions by New Life Drug 17 Dec 2002, 2:11 PM
no thank you.
on some deleted poem 17 Dec 2002, 11:56 AM
eh?
on panic by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 2:28 PM
I didn't get it until reading the comments. :/
on in a parking lot by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 2:36 PM
interesting, but. Hmm. I don't get the 3x-teed waddler.
on drum circle by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 2:56 PM
color me confounded and confused. :/
on of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT 17 Dec 2002, 8:41 PM
wow.

you sure managed to get an assload of comments on this. :)

I don't see the balance/lack of competition. I see the straining to destroy. I think I need more to lead me to this zen.
on Of Deformed Frogs and Prosperity by Quarton 17 Dec 2002, 12:02 PM
hmm. good social commentary, ish -- except it was too *thick* to read through, back and forth, on and on. and I'd be one to agree with you (at least what I read through).
on Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle 17 Dec 2002, 12:57 PM
mame? or maim? very different things. one's an arcade game emulator.

reads like a bunch of cliches strung together. :/
on fire by bxjay170 17 Dec 2002, 1:36 PM
interesting. any reason you used /'s as linebreaks? damned glad I put in the "wordwrap ~ 72 chars" code a few days ago. this seems like a reasonable rap, but I don't see anything here that makes it stand out from the crowd.
on some deleted poem 17 Dec 2002, 2:09 PM
I still don't get "sky blacked in the earth". lead chimneys?

er, basically I don't get any of it, especially not the poem as a whole. sorry.
on Elegy by moonUnit 17 Dec 2002, 2:10 PM
hannah sounds familiar. the rest don't ring a bell. ? color me clueless, I'll refrain from voting.
on some deleted poem 17 Dec 2002, 2:13 PM
very cute, but I don't get who 'you' are in this. maybe I'm just not up on my DC. or perhaps it's not important. :)
on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8 17 Dec 2002, 11:49 AM
definitely an other. I have to admit I didn't make it to the bottom, but I enjoyed what I skimmed.
on some deleted poem 17 Dec 2002, 12:00 PM
cute. any reason for 4-6-5 instead of 5-7-5, or am I missing something?
on she wonders, by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 1:49 PM
rarr. :)
on eyes by moonUnit 17 Dec 2002, 2:14 PM
this I like. it captured a "thing" and played it back from a different perspective. especially the "perhaps they just imagined you" twist. :)
on To You, In Warmer Climes by <~> 28 Dec 2002, 1:27 PM
I'm afraid this just doesn't move me much. It's very pretty, but it's not for me. 8