Re: Surreal... by Yardbird	17-Dec-02/11:47 AM
good surreal, but no rhyming?
Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8	17-Dec-02/11:49 AM
definitely an other. I have to admit I didn't make it to the bottom, but I enjoyed what I skimmed.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/11:56 AM
eh?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/12:00 PM
cute. any reason for 4-6-5 instead of 5-7-5, or am I missing something?
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/12:01 PM
eh?
Re: Of Deformed Frogs and Prosperity by Quarton	17-Dec-02/12:02 PM
hmm. good social commentary, ish -- except it was too *thick* to read through, back and forth, on and on. and I'd be one to agree with you (at least what I read through).
Re: Trust by hobojo	17-Dec-02/12:56 PM
drown(ed?) hmm. nah.
Re: Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle	17-Dec-02/12:57 PM
mame? or maim? very different things. one's an arcade game emulator. reads like a bunch of cliches strung together. :/
Re: Misplaced admoration by deep-as-a-puddle	17-Dec-02/12:58 PM
too much "forced the line to fit the rhyme". rhythm could use work.
Re: fire by bxjay170	17-Dec-02/1:36 PM
interesting. any reason you used /'s as linebreaks? damned glad I put in the "wordwrap ~ 72 chars" code a few days ago. this seems like a reasonable rap, but I don't see anything here that makes it stand out from the crowd.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/2:09 PM
I still don't get "sky blacked in the earth". lead chimneys? er, basically I don't get any of it, especially not the poem as a whole. sorry.
Re: Elegy by moonUnit	17-Dec-02/2:10 PM
hannah sounds familiar. the rest don't ring a bell. ? color me clueless, I'll refrain from voting.
Re: Various actions by New Life Drug	17-Dec-02/2:11 PM
no thank you.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-02/2:13 PM
very cute, but I don't get who 'you' are in this. maybe I'm just not up on my DC. or perhaps it's not important. :)
Re: eyes by moonUnit	17-Dec-02/2:14 PM
this I like. it captured a "thing" and played it back from a different perspective. especially the "perhaps they just imagined you" twist. :)
Re: of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT	17-Dec-02/8:41 PM
wow. you sure managed to get an assload of comments on this. :) I don't see the balance/lack of competition. I see the straining to destroy. I think I need more to lead me to this zen.
Re: To You, In Warmer Climes by <~>	28-Dec-02/1:27 PM
I'm afraid this just doesn't move me much. It's very pretty, but it's not for me. 8
Re: she wonders, by <~>	28-Dec-02/1:49 PM
rarr. :)
Re: panic by <~>	28-Dec-02/2:28 PM
I didn't get it until reading the comments. :/
Re: in a parking lot by <~>	28-Dec-02/2:36 PM
interesting, but. Hmm. I don't get the 3x-teed waddler.