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Misplaced admoration (Free verse) by deep-as-a-puddle
Our paths do cross but your head it never turns,
Inside of me i feel my heart yearn.
For months i turned myself around,
but your love i never found.
When valentines came and two became on face,
still my admoration i misplaced.
For days on end i would dream of you,
until one night that dream fell through.
The cold, harsh snow melted away,
and through the night broke the day.
For once i was in darkness, now in light,
I have laid to rest my eternal fight.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.714286
Weighted score: 4.9231596
Overall Rank: 9398
Posted: December 17, 2002 12:45 PM PST; Last modified: December 17, 2002 12:45 PM PST
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