poemranker ::20 most recent comments by SupremeDreamer (1101-1120) and replies

Comments bySupremeDreamer, 1101–1120 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Christs Harlot by Don-Quixote 24 Jul 2003, 7:42 PM
thanks
replying on Nude pictures of children at work by Shardik 23 Jul 2003, 11:21 PM
you need more sex.. have a dildo, let the waters go from that tight dam, let the river flow, please go, hoe. ;)
on A Student in Descent by EAger to Offend 23 Jul 2003, 11:16 PM
Nice, nice.. ;) 10.
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8 23 Jul 2003, 11:12 PM
Ah, horus, dont worry, alot of my own work is being shat apon with blue zeros aswell.. not many can appreciate the way you challenge people to write better than they currently do, or the way you poke at PC like a madman with a knife. But, you know what? fuck them. ;) 10.
replying on The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer 23 Jul 2003, 11:02 PM
street poet.. hrmm.. im not sure if this is a label i really want to keep ;/
on null by Bill Z Bub 22 Jul 2003, 7:12 PM
i feel small.. ;/ 10.
on I am the gayest by walrus8 22 Jul 2003, 7:09 PM
Well damn... your no longer in denial.. 10. ;)
on Vodka, An ex-girlfriend, and a mess by Luzr 20 Jul 2003, 4:53 PM
hey hey, nothin like a hangover to snap you out of writers block. 8
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom 20 Jul 2003, 4:42 PM
Im not jesus. ;P
replying on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom 19 Jul 2003, 2:02 PM
want some fried shrimp?
on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom 19 Jul 2003, 1:28 PM
awww lil wabbit, dont worry, i got a case of writers block aswell.. after the monk and ballerina poems my brain had an overload and short circuited... lets just say my heads a bowl of fried shrimp. ;P
replying on Slip by Terence 19 Jul 2003, 4:31 AM
Golden Q-tip Award, i think.
on My Angel of Darkness by goddessbyfire 19 Jul 2003, 4:24 AM
not bad, not bad at all. blessed with 7.
replying on Paean by Terence 19 Jul 2003, 4:09 AM
horus is a damn good writer, but i like the oyster/pearl version.. not because its better or anything of the sort, but because it just tickles my g-spot.
replying on beyond sences by calilegzzz 19 Jul 2003, 4:06 AM
I certainly will be happy the day i see it improved. ;)
on Mistaken Paradise by DJCARTER 18 Jul 2003, 9:47 PM
alas.. if this was written better, i would love it.. but im forced to bless it with 7, not higher.. ;(
on Federales by Bachus 18 Jul 2003, 9:09 PM
The rubber glove snaps
As I bend to touch my toes
Liquid burritos

-- i love this stanza.. ;P 9.
on beyond sences by calilegzzz 18 Jul 2003, 9:06 PM
I like it.. but i think it could have been better written/presented. 7.
on Paean by Terence 18 Jul 2003, 9:03 PM
Its a cute lil piece, the only thing i really liked was the oyster/pearl bit.. reminds me of a poem i wrote when i was 15. blessed with 8. welcome to the ranker!
on Slip by Terence 18 Jul 2003, 8:56 PM
Damn good writing. 10.