| Re: The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
3-Sep-03/7:06 AM |
cute. nice ascii crosses.. i bet settle is going to do one with jesus on it, bleeding and all that in response.
Did your church pat you on the back for reciting this poem? did you manage not to have a random bowel movement and get all red in the face because no one likes lethal gas being expelled in a place of holy worship, nor brown gravy dripping on the altar?
--end of jokes meant to insult--
overall 7. consult settle for better ascii crosses.
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3-Sep-03/7:11 AM |
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| Re: Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend |
3-Sep-03/7:27 AM |
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Well.. kinda lost me someplaces, then took hold of me again.. 7.
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3-Sep-03/7:51 AM |
Better than the daddy poem. kept me on track but you need to stop getting all defensive and emotional, saying things like "im sorry you hate my poetry".
I dont. I dont "hate" any piece of writing, hate is an emotion i reserve for those unlucky enough to recieve it.
This is a rough draft. It has concepts laid out. Comprehension is hanging by a pinky, and the cliff has soil that tends to crumble. If you care about this poem, then get the shoe polish lady, and fucking make this shine.
6.
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| Re: The One and Only by J.B. Manning |
3-Sep-03/1:02 PM |
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| Re: Outliving the Alphabet (say goodbye to abecedarian) by Retaliate |
4-Sep-03/6:18 PM |
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Aww.. cmon now, you know i just do the meth to piss darkie off. Have a fun trip, and Happy Birthday!! :)
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| Re: Why Stay? by LuckyJoe |
4-Sep-03/6:22 PM |
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ok, that mouse/house rhyme was one bad way to end this.
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| Re: Boy's Hell by shadowaura |
4-Sep-03/7:06 PM |
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weep, why? for there is knives a plenty. 8.
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| Re: Gone (75) by shadowaura |
4-Sep-03/7:08 PM |
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I know you.. your the ghost of poetry past. 7
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| Re: Goodbye by shadowaura |
4-Sep-03/7:09 PM |
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notice how you keep talking about the same things? widen your view, there is more in the universe than tears, you simply need to wipe them away and see.
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| Re: Blind Faith by NNirvana13666 |
5-Sep-03/8:43 PM |
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wow.. how dramatic.. lmao.. your amusing.
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| Re: Warlocks by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
5-Sep-03/8:48 PM |
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Hrmm. certainly different from other stuff ive seen from you. 7.
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10-Sep-03/5:56 AM |
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joe, this "fates end" crap seem... really over done.. worse than that, it sounds all corny..
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| Re: Why Stay? by LuckyJoe |
10-Sep-03/6:47 AM |
hrmm "icey tomb".. now.. where have i heard that one before?
heh, heres a 6.
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| Re: What you know by INTRANSIT |
10-Sep-03/10:40 AM |
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resurrection of the old. ITS JUDGEMENT DAY!
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| Re: Armageddon (I Am Mr. America) by SupremeDreamer |
12-Sep-03/4:05 AM |
Jesus wont forgive me
and if he does
ill shoot him
and eat his holy flesh
after i marinate it
in green sushi salsa
OK? OK? DOES GOD STILL LOVE ME?
I couldnt give a shit either way.
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12-Sep-03/4:51 PM |
âhaving the usual?â
good. now if you turned the church into a bar, you sir, would be a fucking brilliant bastard.. but you fell short.. tsk.
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| Re: Nicholas Martin by horus8 |
12-Sep-03/5:03 PM |
wtf? really?
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that is very sad to hear.. and leaves me, a man of words
with very little of any value to say.
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| Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
12-Sep-03/6:03 PM |
ok, Mr "Wordsmith.."
just one thing: assumtion should be assumption
tsk. nice title.
heres an 8.
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12-Sep-03/6:22 PM |
your scalp makes a good wig sir.
people mistaken me for a cowboy.
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