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Gone (75) (Free verse) by shadowaura
This wind is blowing in my face So cold it freezes my tears I hide my pain with false hate But in truth, I wish you were here When I cried, Seventy-five tears fell when you left After you died, Seventy-five tears fell in utter silence I can remember that day as though it were yesterday The day darkness fell and took you away Now I stoop to drop more tears onto your grave I pray that in the end I will see you again Because of you I'm hoping in eternity And I pray that it will all be okay And when the next seventy-five tears fall in silence, I pray that you will see them and wipe them away... T.J.L. age 14

Down the ladder: Self Portrait

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6093
Posted: September 4, 2003 5:13 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2003 5:13 PM PDT
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[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.179.229 | 4-Sep-03/7:08 PM | Reply
I know you.. your the ghost of poetry past. 7
[9] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.109 | 5-Sep-03/8:09 PM | Reply
i liked it, it showed good emotion, write more
[8] tadpole @ 63.231.100.33 | 25-Nov-03/12:03 PM | Reply
nice
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