poemranker ::Gone (75) by shadowaura

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Gone (75)

Member since 2003 · Posted 4 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

This wind is blowing in my face So cold it freezes my tears I hide my pain with false hate But in truth, I wish you were here When I cried, Seventy-five tears fell when you left After you died, Seventy-five tears fell in utter silence I can remember that day as though it were yesterday The day darkness fell and took you away Now I stoop to drop more tears onto your grave I pray that in the end I will see you again Because of you I'm hoping in eternity And I pray that it will all be okay And when the next seventy-five tears fall in silence, I pray that you will see them and wipe them away... T.J.L. age 14

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[7] SupremeDreamer 4-Sep-03/7:08 PM Reply
I know you.. your the ghost of poetry past. 7
[9] electroman1979 5-Sep-03/8:09 PM Reply
i liked it, it showed good emotion, write more
[8] tadpole 25-Nov-03/12:03 PM Reply
nice