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Gone (75) (Free verse) by shadowaura
This wind is blowing in my face
So cold it freezes my tears
I hide my pain with false hate
But in truth, I wish you were here
When I cried,
Seventy-five tears fell when you left
After you died,
Seventy-five tears fell in utter silence
I can remember that day as though it were yesterday
The day darkness fell and took you away
Now I stoop to drop more tears onto your grave
I pray that in the end I will see you again
Because of you I'm hoping in eternity
And I pray that it will all be okay
And when the next seventy-five tears fall in silence,
I pray that you will see them and wipe them away...
T.J.L.
age 14
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6093
Posted: September 4, 2003 5:13 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2003 5:13 PM PDT
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