Re: If I Wrote The Perfect Poem by toward	12-Sep-03/6:27 PM
stumbling and rolling around is a good way to learn about the grass. "its green and soft" yeah. i know. "Dur" 7 [mental note: dark, im MR. Simpleton, but your MISS FAGGOT.]
Re: S.lobster vs. G.madcow by baphomet	13-Sep-03/2:47 AM
YOU ARE HORUS!!!!! HORUS!!!! HORUS!!!!! HAIL LORD BACHUS!!!! HAIL KING SHARDIK!!!! WOOO! lol. bonkers.
Re: The Business of Church by <{Baba^Yaga}>	21-Sep-03/2:23 PM
a masterpiece. 10
Re: Yoko and Sakura Make Love by William Delacroix	22-Sep-03/6:51 PM
whats this? the perversion of hidden dragon scenes?
Re: this is your poetry by nentwined	22-Sep-03/6:54 PM
masterpiece!!!! 10!!!! WISE BUDDAH SPEAKS!!!
Re: Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe	22-Sep-03/8:06 PM
whisper: joe.. you could cut it by half and actually make it a bomb.
Re: In the Cold Waste by razorgrin	22-Sep-03/8:10 PM
10!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Sep-03/8:12 PM
you dislike this site SOOOO much, but yet you continue to post and come here? your an idiot.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Sep-03/9:21 AM
last line.. was bad. but the rest of it was the best ive seen from you joe, good work. you earned the title of poet. 9. happy huntin.
Re: Last attempt at "My Father's Dreams" by Joe-joe	28-Sep-03/12:58 AM
good cutting joe, whats that phrase? "i told you so" and heres a well deserved eight.
Re: A spectacular poem by a handsome man by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Sep-03/1:09 AM
amen. and heres a 10. hang the song bird
Re: A decade and five years of thought. by baphomet	29-Sep-03/2:03 AM
skull fucking fantastic wish i had bigger wings.
Re: I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik	30-Sep-03/10:11 PM
wonderfull stuff- your life is interesting indeed. 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Oct-03/9:15 AM
lmao. well, now that was good darkie. 10. are you two going to get married soon? will there be icecream and cookies? (will the church have ramps for your wheelchair?) these little details are good to know about. (oh, and where are my lost comments?)
Re: Unloyal Poon (Free Puss) by A Spanish Devil by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Oct-03/4:13 PM
-how a young man is lead to neo-nazism and the kkk... jealousy and cock size can produce some interesting and unpleasant results.. heh. 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-03/4:17 PM
hey, mr "president"... what about the boogie man, broken down heating systems, wornout and thin blankets (lets not forget those creapy whisperings and shadows that morph into monsters before my eyes) jesus christ. dubbed "dont worry, you dont need to wet the bed little child, its ok, your safe and sound.. *FART*" 2
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-03/4:25 PM
heh. dont look at me, im not shy to shout CRAPPY POEM 0 0 0 0!!! in wonderfull green attire. you should see my musehearts swimming lessons poem.. it has a ton of blue zeros and even a green one (all of the zeros are musehearts- she didnt appreciate my public overview of her writing..) theres no point in calling these folks out, since they arent "brave" enough to be upfront with their judgements- most of them.. others just have an obsessive hate for certain poems/poets- welcome to rankerville, its a jungle which is infested with barbarians and tamed animals alike. btw, heres a six.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-03/4:26 PM
ps: whats your obsession with old world english usage? its corny and.. simply serves little purpose here except to downgrade your work.. in my opinion.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-03/5:00 PM
of lights to drift. eh? um.. were you rushing this one? it looks like it, because alot of these lines suddenly jump into the next without fluent transition. ex: but she slips coyly away like a bride blushing, translucent limbs in fluid motion mesmerising as they pass... suddenly translucent limbs appear? wouldnt it be better to mention limbs when you start talking about how she slips away? looks like a rough draft to me.. needs cutting, sorting, and tweaking- 6 for now.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-Oct-03/5:05 PM
heh.. i like the spurt of cls related writes.. but its beginning to lose flamesparks.. hrmm.. well, shit, since cls poems are in vogue all of a sudden, im going to move the jesusfreak parody up into recents for the occassion. 7.