Poemranker [Poem: this is your poetry] [by nentwined] Thu Apr 18 20:29:34 PDT 2024

[10] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.164.91 | 22-Sep-03/6:54 PM | Reply

masterpiece!!!! 10!!!! WISE BUDDAH SPEAKS!!!

[n/a] nentwined @ 209.31.226.178 > SupremeDreamer | 22-Sep-03/7:05 PM | Reply

my first acrostic. :)

[n/a] GeschÃ¤ftsreise @ 4.40.32.229 > nentwined | 22-Sep-03/8:16 PM | Reply

(smile) - Should've left the acrostic tag to the observant eye. Always build trap doors and secret entrances and hidden treasures into your poetry, I say.

[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > GeschÃ¤ftsreise | 22-Sep-03/8:23 PM | Reply

I'm not so advanced yet. But I shall work on it. :)

Often my attempts at (image rich) straight-forwardness become such stretched contrivances that they carry nothing. Any attempt at hidden gems would unceremoniously collapse such a makeshift structure.

Hmm. There should be a poem in that. ;)

[n/a] GeschÃ¤ftsreise @ 4.40.32.229 > nentwined | 23-Sep-03/8:07 PM | Reply

Oh no, I meant the poem is nice, it just might be more fulfilling for you if you hadn't told people that it was an acrostic and see if anyone comments.

[10] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.160.78 > nentwined | 22-Sep-03/10:36 PM | Reply

last stanza should have been cut out.

:P

[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > SupremeDreamer | 22-Sep-03/10:40 PM | Reply

youshu? :)

[10] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.164.188 > nentwined | 23-Sep-03/1:23 AM | Reply

just opinionated - better impact i think, because id be thinking why my poetry would be smelly undergarments instead of wondering why you told me to think upon these ponderances as if your poem was so important. :P

[10] TheVoiceless @ 206.72.7.58 | 23-Sep-03/1:42 AM | Reply

I like it.

[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 23-Sep-03/7:05 AM | Reply

If we followed this, would poemranker cease to exist?

[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > INTRANSIT | 23-Sep-03/7:23 AM | Reply

Hmm. I can't follow through the contradiction of people on poemranker following instructions. ;) Though perhaps it would become something worse. I'm not very good at such prognostication. And I think I'm too tired to be talking, as these big words are just falling out at random. Off to work...