(smile) - Should've left the acrostic tag to the observant eye. Always build trap doors and secret entrances and hidden treasures into your poetry, I say.
I'm not so advanced yet. But I shall work on it. :)
Often my attempts at (image rich) straight-forwardness become such stretched contrivances that they carry nothing. Any attempt at hidden gems would unceremoniously collapse such a makeshift structure.
Oh no, I meant the poem is nice, it just might be more fulfilling for you if you hadn't told people that it was an acrostic and see if anyone comments.
just opinionated - better impact i think, because id be thinking why my poetry would be smelly undergarments instead of wondering why you told me to think upon these ponderances as if your poem was so important. :P
Hmm. I can't follow through the contradiction of people on poemranker following instructions. ;) Though perhaps it would become something worse. I'm not very good at such prognostication. And I think I'm too tired to be talking, as these big words are just falling out at random. Off to work...
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Often my attempts at (image rich) straight-forwardness become such stretched contrivances that they carry nothing. Any attempt at hidden gems would unceremoniously collapse such a makeshift structure.
Hmm. There should be a poem in that. ;)
:P
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