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this is your poetry (Other) by nentwined

yellow- orange undergarments. smelly human undergarments. Think upon these ponderances.

nentwined 22-Sep-03/8:23 PM
I'm not so advanced yet. But I shall work on it. :)

Often my attempts at (image rich) straight-forwardness become such stretched contrivances that they carry nothing. Any attempt at hidden gems would unceremoniously collapse such a makeshift structure.

Hmm. There should be a poem in that. ;)




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