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Blind Faith (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
Wanting to be one
Channel my mind into the sun
Rays of hope have washed over my body
Leaving me empty
Leaving hopeless
When I speak do you listen?
Do you mock my wishes?
I visit where you are to be
Only to leave feeling more empty
Talk to me
Embrace my want for the calling
Allow me to understand
With me it is a constant plead
The son of life bleeds before me
Wishing I could drink without the after taste of regret
The alter burns my knees
My mind wants to be free of uncertainty
But never once did you speak to me
You never allow me to feel
Passages of subsistence reveal timeâs sins
Donât ever forgive my sins
Donât ever patronize my free will
Bask in your mighty power
Leave my soul wandering
For I will never repent
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Weighted score: 4.713913
Overall Rank: 11964
Posted: September 5, 2003 8:36 AM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2003 8:36 AM PDT
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