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Goodbye (Lyric) by shadowaura I can hear your tears hit the ground
After they gently roll down your face,
And I can hear your heart pound
As I shiver in your embrace
You whisper your sickness in my ear
Your voice almost drowned in your rain
You tell me that your death is near
Not enough love; too much pain
Before you struck me as a warrior
One willing to fight the enemy
Someone who would not surrender,
Someone stronger than I will ever be
I choke as you embrace your death
And now I can see that you're just like me
I fight back tears as you draw your last breath,
Goodbye my love, and rest in peace...
T.J.L
age 14
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Posted: September 4, 2003 5:11 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2003 5:11 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6662316 Overall Rank: 12246 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.179.229
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4-Sep-03/7:09 PM
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notice how you keep talking about the same things? widen your view, there is more in the universe than tears, you simply need to wipe them away and see.
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shadowaura @ 207.61.235.41
> SupremeDreamer
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5-Sep-03/4:09 PM
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will do.
great job...i like this a lot...it's sad but really well written
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