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Goodbye (Lyric) by shadowaura

I can hear your tears hit the ground After they gently roll down your face, And I can hear your heart pound As I shiver in your embrace You whisper your sickness in my ear Your voice almost drowned in your rain You tell me that your death is near Not enough love; too much pain Before you struck me as a warrior One willing to fight the enemy Someone who would not surrender, Someone stronger than I will ever be I choke as you embrace your death And now I can see that you're just like me I fight back tears as you draw your last breath, Goodbye my love, and rest in peace... T.J.L age 14

shadowaura 5-Sep-03/4:09 PM
will do.




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