Re: Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer	8-Dec-03/4:53 AM
Oh, CLS? Why not mention your reasons for zeroing my work this time? hrmm? or will you just zero it and say nothing as usual? Just curiouse.
Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8	10-Dec-03/6:25 PM
Well, good vil.. very personal comments here.. feel like a peeper reading them, but reminds me of alot of things.. I'll shut-up now before it seems like I'm intruding. Anyway- blessed with nine.
Re: Preserves for the basement (Poe Poetry) by Bachus	10-Dec-03/6:36 PM
jellycunt.. lol. 10.
Re: She is A Lover Deep Within by Joe-joe	10-Dec-03/6:38 PM
sounds like a million other love songs joe.. cmon now..
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Dec-03/6:40 PM
The first stanza was great- then the piece waned from there. Blessed with seven.
Re: Terminal by kingit	10-Dec-03/6:42 PM
Blessed with eight.
Re: Birthday of a dead guy by Bobjim	10-Dec-03/6:44 PM
Want to play some mortal kombat with me?
Re: Head. by darby pyn	10-Dec-03/8:33 PM
Nice poem- but the title? sucks. Unfortunately I can not suggest anything better. Blessed with nine.
Re: standing still by phbiscuit	10-Dec-03/8:36 PM
Not bad- a bit long and wordy though. I'd suggest shortening this a bit. Blessed with seven.
Re: Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Dec-03/9:05 PM
Not bad at all my furry friend. Long time no see. Blessed with eight.
Re: Me, myself and I. by darby pyn	16-Dec-03/5:13 AM
I learned this one when i was five. Blessed with 9.
Re: Pose by horus8	16-Dec-03/9:46 PM
Now the last line was "pop- fizzle" Other than that, wonderful. Blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Dec-03/9:21 PM
well, tintagile, this piece is the cherry of my day. A finely crafted poem that got me dreamin a lil easier. thanks. blessed with ten.
Re: Cast a shadow. by darby pyn	17-Dec-03/9:32 PM
They new at youth- "knew"? you know, this piece would be perfect with linebreaks- it would, but I'm not one to fidget, its good either way. 10.
Re: lost... by Tineke	18-Dec-03/7:54 AM
ok, now if your going to write in self pity.. could you atleast TRY you know ATTEMPT to do it in an artistic and creative fashion or something?? This sounds like a fucking therapy session, or more like a public BOO-HOO-HOO classic cliche teenage "I'm lonely and unloved blah blah" Fuck.. get a journal. And your from belgium? This might be the stupidest joke ever concieved and carried out, really now. Whats next? The infamous internet suicide note?
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Dec-03/11:34 PM
Some spelling errors scattered, jerky flow- this could use some trimming and tweaked linebreaks. Other than that, not bad at all. Blessed with eight.
Re: Large Man on peach sandel by horus8	24-Dec-03/10:14 PM
"and shall be not be not be not be not be at rest," ? I'm a wierdo- despite that this poem confuses me. (or was that your intention?) Blessed with seven.
Re: It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos	24-Dec-03/10:20 PM
I've always known god to be the biggest clown ever. Blessed with nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Dec-03/10:33 PM
Your not annoying joe.. your boring at best- annoying people are direct and offensive, arrogant and at times stubborn. They also speak with sizzling attitude- this piece is like listening to a rigidly formal twit who reveals only a slight amount of pompousness that seems amazingly humble. Joe, when you pick a topic/character basis for a poem, try to become the character in the poem.. which definately requires you to exclude any of your own assumptions or mental attributes.
Re: Poetry is Pointless by somemorepoetry	29-Dec-03/10:56 PM
I don't act important.. I just act like an asshole with a pen 'n too much time on my hands. Oh and did I mention that I love to write? NO REALLY. SOON I'LL PUBLISH MY BEATNIK & METH ANTHOLOGY (first step in conquering the planet, next step is spiking the water supply with lsd, convincing everyone im Jesus and that their head is actually an orange.) Anyway, heres a seven.