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Large Man on peach sandel (Free verse) by horus8
Sitting ahead of Kentucky
Igloo, or a tootsie pop
The waxing chipping gold
of a contintental breakfast
A winter morning IHOP
His head is up wind
Nose down right
When the flesh enters him
through the healthy, whale
eye twilight, zoned.
His chins are not
and shall be not be not
be not be not be at rest,
from this huge fourty four
until his day of pancakes
But here they lie, glued,
clasping one another like
terrified sisters in the
woolen womb of sandal
The rain that shouts through
nearby shanties, the dead ass,
smoothes his hair,
weathering
the stung of this peach's pose
All pears witness and
insulate the last peach
The bowl of froot on the table
next to the man, the sandle.
the rubbercement walk she stand
upon
Her extravegant periwinkle dress,
Her choppy steps,
the gilded leather of her
baby shoesies
The DAMN very air!
The black whirririrriringlingding of the
camera, and weight of the tape
rewinding fee.
Of the Large Man on the Peach sandal [sic].
Amen.
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Posted: December 21, 2003 2:01 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 2:09 PM PST
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