| Re: a comment on Dance Of Insanity by forsaken |
6-May-12/2:15 PM |
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Who're a moron this poem is about growing up, about killing the boy inside you
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| Re: Breathless by misused |
20-Apr-08/10:50 AM |
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| Re: a comment on If I Had by forsaken |
4-Apr-08/1:56 AM |
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Thanks, I liked yours. It reminds me of things I once and well sometimes still do feel. I know you don't know me, but I try my best to help people. I guess you could say I feel I need to make up for my past, so if you ever want someone to talk to who's gone through alot and you'll ever have to meet. You can always hit me up on myspace, my address his on my page here.
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| Re: RAGTIME by xyz |
22-Oct-07/6:41 PM |
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Wow I know I don't write that great, but this is better then mine you say. I just want to know can you get a girl to look at you the same way I have no problem doing.
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| Re: a comment on Be The One by forsaken |
17-Oct-07/8:29 PM |
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It's a bt strange cause she still means has much has she always has, but I just don't think of her that way. Maybe I realize I couldn't hurt her just being her friend if that makes sense, so I just stop thinking for her that way.
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| Re: a comment on Losing you by forsaken |
17-Oct-07/8:07 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Be The One by forsaken |
17-Oct-07/8:03 PM |
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Actually she has become my best friend and even though her felings still mean the world to me. I've learned that I'm more then happy just being friends.
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| Re: a comment on Lonely Soul by faded_twilight |
13-Jul-07/8:54 PM |
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You still out there I haven't read these you so long. Don't ask me why cause I don't either, but I'd like to hear from you?
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| Re: a comment on Be The One by forsaken |
14-Dec-06/1:19 PM |
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No offence taking, and yeah she isn't with me and most likly ever will be. Even though I know this I still long for her as I've done since the first time I saw her on Oct. 8, 05.
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| Re: Lonely Soul by faded_twilight |
20-Apr-05/2:18 PM |
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I like this poem as I did your Hurting Heart one. I wish you had more on here, since I enjoy these more then any others. There's something about poems about being alone that always catch my eye. Do you have more on a different site?
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| Re: No One by sk8boardandpoems |
10-Apr-05/1:24 PM |
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I've ment someone who skated and wrote poems before, up in Maine. When I was going to school, I doubt it, but I wonder could that be you. She also was angeered by the refrence of being like Avril. That aside I do like this poem if that what you'd like to call it. Maybe more like a quick shoot of your mind set at the time. Maybe something longer about how it feels to be alone, without anyone to fill some of that emptiness inside.
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| Re: a comment on Dance Of Insanity by forsaken |
1-Oct-04/6:34 AM |
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Well it is about getting a part of you out of your body.
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| Re: Gethsemane (or, Jesus learns what's up with dying) by zodiac |
19-Feb-04/4:01 PM |
I've read four of your others poems not voting, because the ideas of them we'ren't my cup of tea.
This one was really good, and maybe the others were too but they just shit in my eyes. At lease they are after reading this one.
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| Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone |
19-Feb-04/3:25 PM |
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To be honest I don't believe in Jesus, and I have 666 on my neck. I give you 9, becuase it's good and it's possible that there's a Jesus. If I did believe a 10 would have fit, but sadly I don't believe in something I don't understand.
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| Re: Border towns & the runs by horus8 |
18-Jul-03/6:57 AM |
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This is great, plus it sounds like back home in Arizona. Living in the poor part with all the Mexicans, I've seen a lot of bald spics with tattos.(10)
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| Re: New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld |
18-Jul-03/6:48 AM |
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You're just fucking around with stuff what made childhood easier to get though. Plus its a simple copy, not even of anything great. Excapt of memories of being young and blind to the World of Hate.(0)
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| Re: a comment on HATE by forsaken'sbigbro |
16-Jul-03/5:37 AM |
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What's so sad? That's how most of america is.
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
15-Jul-03/10:22 AM |
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Love it and I hope that isn't true, but I think it is.
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| Re: The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
24-Jun-03/12:32 PM |
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What about T-paper, this is way worse then my insanity.
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