| Re: The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8 |
24-Jun-03/12:32 PM |
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What about T-paper, this is way worse then my insanity.
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| Re: Karma by blankel |
15-Jul-03/10:22 AM |
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Love it and I hope that isn't true, but I think it is.
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| Re: New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld |
18-Jul-03/6:48 AM |
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You're just fucking around with stuff what made childhood easier to get though. Plus its a simple copy, not even of anything great. Excapt of memories of being young and blind to the World of Hate.(0)
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| Re: Border towns & the runs by horus8 |
18-Jul-03/6:57 AM |
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This is great, plus it sounds like back home in Arizona. Living in the poor part with all the Mexicans, I've seen a lot of bald spics with tattos.(10)
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| Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone |
19-Feb-04/3:25 PM |
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To be honest I don't believe in Jesus, and I have 666 on my neck. I give you 9, becuase it's good and it's possible that there's a Jesus. If I did believe a 10 would have fit, but sadly I don't believe in something I don't understand.
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| Re: Gethsemane (or, Jesus learns what's up with dying) by zodiac |
19-Feb-04/4:01 PM |
I've read four of your others poems not voting, because the ideas of them we'ren't my cup of tea.
This one was really good, and maybe the others were too but they just shit in my eyes. At lease they are after reading this one.
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29-Sep-04/4:03 PM |
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I think it was pretty, but they're right it's not really poetry. I don't have the right to talk really, but you didn't call it a poem it's a letter right.
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| Re: No One by sk8boardandpoems |
10-Apr-05/1:24 PM |
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I've ment someone who skated and wrote poems before, up in Maine. When I was going to school, I doubt it, but I wonder could that be you. She also was angeered by the refrence of being like Avril. That aside I do like this poem if that what you'd like to call it. Maybe more like a quick shoot of your mind set at the time. Maybe something longer about how it feels to be alone, without anyone to fill some of that emptiness inside.
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| Re: Lonely Soul by faded_twilight |
20-Apr-05/2:18 PM |
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I like this poem as I did your Hurting Heart one. I wish you had more on here, since I enjoy these more then any others. There's something about poems about being alone that always catch my eye. Do you have more on a different site?
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13-Jul-07/10:29 PM |
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| Re: RAGTIME by xyz |
22-Oct-07/6:41 PM |
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Wow I know I don't write that great, but this is better then mine you say. I just want to know can you get a girl to look at you the same way I have no problem doing.
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| Re: Breathless by misused |
20-Apr-08/10:50 AM |
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