on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
24 Jun 2003, 12:32 PM
What about T-paper, this is way worse then my insanity.
on New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld
18 Jul 2003, 6:48 AM
You're just fucking around with stuff what made childhood easier to get though. Plus its a simple copy, not even of anything great. Excapt of memories of being young and blind to the World of Hate.(0)
on Border towns & the runs by horus8
18 Jul 2003, 6:57 AM
This is great, plus it sounds like back home in Arizona. Living in the poor part with all the Mexicans, I've seen a lot of bald spics with tattos.(10)
on Holding on for Jesus by Everyone
19 Feb 2004, 3:25 PM
To be honest I don't believe in Jesus, and I have 666 on my neck. I give you 9, becuase it's good and it's possible that there's a Jesus. If I did believe a 10 would have fit, but sadly I don't believe in something I don't understand.
on Gethsemane (or, Jesus learns what's up with dying) by zodiac
19 Feb 2004, 4:01 PM
I've read four of your others poems not voting, because the ideas of them we'ren't my cup of tea.
This one was really good, and maybe the others were too but they just shit in my eyes. At lease they are after reading this one.
This one was really good, and maybe the others were too but they just shit in my eyes. At lease they are after reading this one.
on some deleted poem
29 Sep 2004, 4:03 PM
I think it was pretty, but they're right it's not really poetry. I don't have the right to talk really, but you didn't call it a poem it's a letter right.
on No One by sk8boardandpoems
10 Apr 2005, 1:24 PM
I've ment someone who skated and wrote poems before, up in Maine. When I was going to school, I doubt it, but I wonder could that be you. She also was angeered by the refrence of being like Avril. That aside I do like this poem if that what you'd like to call it. Maybe more like a quick shoot of your mind set at the time. Maybe something longer about how it feels to be alone, without anyone to fill some of that emptiness inside.
on Lonely Soul by faded_twilight
20 Apr 2005, 2:18 PM
I like this poem as I did your Hurting Heart one. I wish you had more on here, since I enjoy these more then any others. There's something about poems about being alone that always catch my eye. Do you have more on a different site?
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2007, 10:29 PM
You sure u want it back
on Breathless by misused
20 Apr 2008, 10:50 AM
I really like this one