Re: Talk by Skamper	15-Jun-07/6:45 AM
well; i think that's nice .... somewhat lacking in something .... getting skampered out catcha later
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Jun-07/2:41 AM
ummmm ... thanx for forcing me to a deeper understanding of the haiku/Senryu form ... still digesting ... wgb
Re: Just words by aliena	18-Jun-07/3:05 PM
this is something we all go through .... and you did care enough to submit .. in my view a poem of no value except as exercise .... but do you care? .... :-)
Re: Lines and half lines by aliena	18-Jun-07/3:10 PM
...i think she's got it .... a self referential poem that leaps about with brilliant humour ! .......
Re: Win, Win, Lose, Lose by Dovina	22-Jun-07/11:46 PM
wow, Dovina; must be yr most powerful poem yet ... tho must admit I've skipped over quite a few;... just a thought... the end i found flat because the symmetry so obviously demanded it; ... I'da skewed it a bit, ... like win, who needs it..or .loss is lost or something; ... but then then....you know;.it's yr poem :-),I'm more of an imperfectionist
Re: Just Another Reason by Skamper	22-Jun-07/11:54 PM
hi;...yeah; felt exactly the same as jessicazee about the last 3 lines; . the lead up was good enough to deserve much more ... the first 3 lines could in fact stand alone... nice changes of rhythm......7 and a half points
Re: California Bound by Dovina	26-Jul-07/1:59 PM
funny lot, them religeous
Re: Another Date by Dovina	6-Aug-07/4:51 PM
and shed a bitter tear
Re: I love you by jerzeygirl22	8-Aug-07/4:36 PM
the first stanza here swings along real nice but then the poetry (not necessarily the poetic thoughts) seems to dry up.try the rest using the meter of that ... maybe even let the first stanza stand by itself ... the fewer words, the more a poem can say .:-)
Re: Prescription of Pain by Miggy	8-Aug-07/4:40 PM
a point for "chirp"
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Aug-07/4:43 PM
you seemed such a nice sensitive guy too . aaahh ...( sigh)....
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Aug-07/4:44 PM
oh..bluddyell
Re: Sunset Beach by amanda_dcosta	8-Aug-07/4:45 PM
puh..leeze
Re: Crotchety Old Geezer by Dovina	17-Aug-07/6:45 AM
innit though ?!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-07/7:18 AM
what is this about i'm totally senrued out shouts....and grabs his throat! aaaaarrgghhh ...... 7points
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Sep-07/6:00 PM
good
Re: If David Biespiel Wrote A Haiku by Aetius	9-Sep-07/6:02 PM
sol (smiled out loud)
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Sep-07/7:05 AM
lol ... wow ... ten ... gosh ...
Re: Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	18-Oct-07/7:36 AM
too many words
Re: Wayne, do you? by T. Jonathron Remp	18-Oct-07/7:38 AM
either a 8 or a 1 ....dunno .... say 5 .... involving, though ... make that 6