| Re: Final Moon by Caducus |
7-May-07/4:02 PM |
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7-May-07/4:03 PM |
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| Re: requiem for the dead generation by Prince of Void |
7-May-07/4:11 PM |
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... cheer up; can't be that bad!
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7-May-07/4:22 PM |
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| Re: The Emperor's new clothes by thetrev |
7-May-07/4:27 PM |
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cutting edge improvisational phrasing with retro hip-hop under and overtones
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7-May-07/4:30 PM |
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aaaahhh .... absolutely nice; hardly a poem of any great worth, though
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| Re: Lustlets of longing by bharat shekhar |
7-May-07/4:32 PM |
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the poetry seemed to dry up after you came;... never mind, ... happens to all of us :-)
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| Re: Worn Ruse by drnick |
7-May-07/4:35 PM |
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fabulous concept not done full justice by this poem
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7-May-07/4:40 PM |
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got lost in the hims and yous in the final couplet
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| Re: again it happnes by skaskowski |
7-May-07/4:45 PM |
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... yeah but whats it all mean? and is it Art? :-/... yes I'm sure it is :-)
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| Re: Castle of Pandas IV by FreeFormFixation |
7-May-07/4:48 PM |
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string band school of creative writing seems like
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| Re: The Sunnyside of David Uden by lukehanney |
7-May-07/4:50 PM |
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| Re: Bonded by Skamper |
14-Jun-07/5:46 PM |
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| Re: The Search by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:10 AM |
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i felt the 2nd half lacked enough concrete images to hold it together ..... yeah, i did get a bit lost
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| Re: Paper Maker by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:18 AM |
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yeah, the preposition thing..... found it a bit hard going but was rewarded by the clarity of the final image .... stinging just the same
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| Re: The Finding by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:23 AM |
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reads like a wordsmith's musing on an empty-minded sunny sunday afternoon;... will search later for hidden depths, should there be any
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| Re: Llamas by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:27 AM |
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slide your new tongue.... nice ...teach me etc .. is this a matchstick page wandering muttering into the surreal landscape
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| Re: Empty by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:34 AM |
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explanation will often ruin a poem, i know, but is this about an alcoholic suicide or lonesome solitude .... or something else entirely
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| Re: View From The Gutter by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:38 AM |
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yesterday's primordial soup ... luvvitt ! too many words though (imho)
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| Re: The Kissing by Skamper |
15-Jun-07/6:42 AM |
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mmmmm .... hardly a zero; nice sexy rhythm to start of but to maintain momentum in a poem is more difficult than in actual sex and images ought to be stronger or the poem shorter .... imho
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